Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Sonnet

My Man

MY MAN

My man,now, I will close my starry eyes.
Catch... As I'll held my hand to yours.
Quench my emptiness with your heart.
Each heartbeat may it etch, no depart...

My man, oh how I long to be like this,
All of a sudden, summer and winter collide.
Bringing autumn and spring in one
be nearer. nearer... nearer as you please.

My man, you and me in bone-melting bliss
Stars whisper bright of blooming love kiss
Next to God, you're my fortress, my air, my life
From darkness thorns to daylight rose, no strife

My man, hold on, cling tight. Never forgo.
Together, we can soar like pigeon's flights.. 

(c) OLive ELoisa
11:50am
August 14, 2014

**** Got inspired with Tim Smith's poem: GIRL.. :)
Thanks Tim for the inspiration..:} http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet.aspx?
ID=41165

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Honestly J.T. September 29, 2014 at 11:32 AM Nice one

Brenda Meier-Hans September 6, 2014 at 12:30 PM Congratulations on your win Olive.

Faye Gibson September 6, 2014 at 11:13 AM Congratulations, Olive. How are you doing? Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 9, 2014 at 8:15 AM Thanks much Faye..:)appreciate it

Casarah Nance September 5, 2014 at 9:46 PM Woww! this is great, many grats on your win. I thought this was so beautiful, the bone melting bliss. what a description! hugsz Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 9, 2014 at 8:10 AM Thanks much Cassie..:)

Poet Destroyer A September 5, 2014 at 5:34 PM Congratulations, OLIVE , 'thank you for supporting my contest... Stop by my latest blog, "TWILIGHT" if you'd like... Sending hugs to all. <3 LINDA

Paul Callus September 5, 2014 at 5:23 PM Lovely poem Olive_eloi; Your man stands in the shadows...one of these days he will come and surprise you! Congratulations on your win. hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 9, 2014 at 8:07 AM ..:)in God's perfect time He will be revealed..:) soon he will be .:)

Justin Bordner August 16, 2014 at 4:07 PM I applaud your lovely sensibilities Olive!!! Once again you please greatly with original love touch. Your devotion is delicious! " Bone melting bliss...Stars whisper bright of blooming love kiss" Fantastic Love singing! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 22, 2014 at 5:07 AM Thanks so much Justin..:) I really appreciate your great comments that keeps on encouraging me to write more..:) GBU

Lucilla Carrillo August 15, 2014 at 6:22 PM My friend Olive; This is good and I like it, but I always thought you were single. Oh! Happy Birthday. Because of my health - I can't come on line too much... Lucilla Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 15, 2014 at 9:48 PM thank you dear sweet Lucy.. :) I am so honored that among the poets here you choose to read mine.. :) despite you are going through still you manage to be there.. :) yes am still single.. still am praying for God's allowable permission for me to have someone special.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 14, 2014 at 8:49 AM Wow Olive love this one! Happy birthday dear to u! May God bless u wid the best out of His treasures! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 15, 2014 at 9:49 PM Thank you Dr. Upma.. :D i appreciate you coming by.:) God bless you.. :) sorry for not being here.. so busy really..

Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2014 at 4:06 AM - Happy birthday Olive !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Olive, a beautiful poem - inspired by Tim ..... yes, I understand that well :)) - Have a nice day my friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 15, 2014 at 9:51 PM thanks much Anne Lise.. sorry for this late reply.. busy busy still.. :) hope i can make up with you.. hugs,.. God bless us all. :)

Tim Smith August 13, 2014 at 11:21 PM How wonderful Olive...This is so good....hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 14, 2014 at 4:07 AM :) as you inspired this.. :D! ;)