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My Man

MY MAN My man,now, I will close my starry eyes. Catch... As I'll held my hand to yours. Quench my emptiness with your heart. Each heartbeat may it etch, no depart... My man, oh how I long to be like this, All of a sudden, summer and winter collide. Bringing autumn and spring in one be nearer. nearer... nearer as you please. My man, you and me in bone-melting bliss Stars whisper bright of blooming love kiss Next to God, you're my fortress, my air, my life From darkness thorns to daylight rose, no strife My man, hold on, cling tight. Never forgo. Together, we can soar like pigeon's flights.. (c) OLive ELoisa 11:50am August 14, 2014 **** Got inspired with Tim Smith's poem: GIRL.. :) Thanks Tim for the inspiration..:} http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet.aspx? ID=41165

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 9/29/2014 11:32:00 AM

Nice one

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/6/2014 12:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Olive.

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/6/2014 11:13:00 AM

Congratulations, Olive. How are you doing?

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 8:15:00 AM

Thanks much Faye..:)appreciate it

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/5/2014 9:46:00 PM

Woww! this is great, many grats on your win. I thought this was so beautiful, the bone melting bliss. what a description! hugsz

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 8:10:00 AM

Thanks much Cassie..:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2014 5:34:00 PM

Congratulations, OLIVE , 'thank you for supporting my contest... Stop by my latest blog, "TWILIGHT" if you'd like... Sending hugs to all. <3 LINDA

Paul Callus

Date: 9/5/2014 5:23:00 PM

Lovely poem Olive_eloi; Your man stands in the shadows...one of these days he will come and surprise you! Congratulations on your win. hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/9/2014 8:07:00 AM

..:)in God's perfect time He will be revealed..:) soon he will be .:)

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/16/2014 4:07:00 PM

I applaud your lovely sensibilities Olive!!! Once again you please greatly with original love touch. Your devotion is delicious! " Bone melting bliss...Stars whisper bright of blooming love kiss" Fantastic Love singing!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/22/2014 5:07:00 AM

Thanks so much Justin..:) I really appreciate your great comments that keeps on encouraging me to write more..:) GBU

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/15/2014 6:22:00 PM

My friend Olive; This is good and I like it, but I always thought you were single. Oh! Happy Birthday. Because of my health - I can't come on line too much... Lucilla

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/15/2014 9:48:00 PM

thank you dear sweet Lucy.. :) I am so honored that among the poets here you choose to read mine.. :) despite you are going through still you manage to be there.. :) yes am still single.. still am praying for God's allowable permission for me to have someone special.. :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/14/2014 8:49:00 AM

Wow Olive love this one! Happy birthday dear to u! May God bless u wid the best out of His treasures!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/15/2014 9:49:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Upma.. :D i appreciate you coming by.:) God bless you.. :) sorry for not being here.. so busy really..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2014 4:06:00 AM

- Happy birthday Olive !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Olive, a beautiful poem - inspired by Tim ..... yes, I understand that well :)) - Have a nice day my friend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/15/2014 9:51:00 PM

thanks much Anne Lise.. sorry for this late reply.. busy busy still.. :) hope i can make up with you.. hugs,.. God bless us all. :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/13/2014 11:21:00 PM

How wonderful Olive...This is so good....hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/14/2014 4:07:00 AM

:) as you inspired this.. :D! ;)