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My Lucky Street

""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" My street, horseshoe-shaped lucky me! Once worst place, anyone could live, Nigh on everything was adlib. Street's arms pointed north, as should be, the right way when hung on a wall. Keeping luck sake so it can't fall. Happy days, children, one, two, three. Kirk, Kirsty, a year apart, fun! Then some years past Naomi come. The luckiest we still agree, three times near lost to accidents. Like yesterday those incidents. Naomi won't forget, nor we! We never forget our, her luck, those close death moments still do suck! My street, horseshoe-shaped lucky me. Street's arms pointed north, as should be. Happy days, children, one, two, three. The luckiest, we still agree! Naomi won't forget, nor we! """""""""""""""""""""""""""""
13th June 2018 New Constanza Poems Poetry Contest - Sponsored by Emile Pinet

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Date: 7/17/2018 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed this famiky poem. :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 7/17/2018 1:10:00 PM
Susan, many thank yous, appreciated! Famicky, definitely better than familicky lol. Mick :-)
Date: 7/16/2018 1:00:00 PM
Congrats! Luck wins out!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 7/16/2018 7:44:00 PM
Hi Brian, nice when it does, many thanks, Mick
Date: 7/16/2018 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations Mick, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 7/16/2018 7:56:00 PM
I know the feeling there is going to be a lot of first in my haibun contest there so good. Thanks for my placement Emile, Mick

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