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My Loving Adonis in Ipanema

   
Strolling in dreamy Ipanema!
Our long, planned, dream trip came true.
Stiil in wrapped in beads of love to forever be!
Angelic fantasia, bronzed, Columbian you.

We angels, in love, though decades have passed!
Looking into the azure sky, I turn to touch you.
Wondering which Brazilian cloud has room!
For us...the hot blooded-two!

Times when you are callled away know my fidelity 
Longing for you each minute, each hour, each day.
Confident, that I, your obedient monarch butterfly
Will always be by your side, for an eternally  stay!

Whether here or anywhere, always in wonder I stand.
Intoxicated and I am desparately in love with you.
And with you alone,I am your tropical ,
You, my Adonis of a man~ black hair,eyes ofazure blure!

1/1/2024  12 AM



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Eagle Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 1:46 AM
You have a romantic side as a poet and write very well. Great work.
Romios Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 1:02 PM
I feel alone in this. What I mean is Limericks pass love, hands down…passion is probably a better word. I never understabd why. Gracias…Pangie )))
Buhagiar Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 2:43 AM
Pangie, so glad you found love. Was too sick before. A happy New Year.
Romios Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 8:01 AM
Victor, i havent been wriying much eith, mor reading, it is not I ignore anyone. Just exxtremelt titres. I do hopr you are better. I had my family here New Years Eve. We had a ball. God will be with ua at all times…eveb durung illmess. Pangie the best 2024 to you.!!
Wolf Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 7:46 PM
And why is it that I can't take my eyes off of the girl?! Guess I must not be a true poet, eh.
Romios Avatar
January 2, 2024 at 7:54 AM
Gershon, you are a great poet. Bright and brilliant, i cant aswer your question , I think you were funning with me. What a word,” funninhg”. Thank you, Pangie
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January 1, 2024 at 2:47 PM
Very romantic Pangie, your Adonis what a wonderful and beautiful memory… Belle
Romios Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 3:12 PM
HNY, Beryl.. Thank you for the visit today! There is nothing like an Adonis. And there is nothing like love.. am I right! I am so tired of New Year’s Eve because I stayed up all night and am exhaistrf! Pangie
Goldsmith Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 1:19 PM
What a creative write/picture to start the year off with. I enjoyed it... Have a blessed day writing away in 24................
Romios Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 2:26 PM
Hey Paula,, supportive friend ….thank you so much for your constant support orf my time here. And no big deal but you’re always around.. that says a lot about you. Glad you liked the poem. i love, love the image , too Pangie xx
Fowler Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 11:49 AM
Sweet and romantic dear Pangie. :)
Fowler Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 3:38 PM
Glad the image was uploaded. Just lovely... :)
Romios Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 1:37 PM
Ahhhh, tha you , you Linda! You know my heartt.. P,ease see the image, that was added! I am so gla you read this! Pangie!
Elliott Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 11:31 AM
Hi Pangie, you're quite the gifted romantic writer. You must have a treasury of poems for Valentine's Day. Happy New Year's Day xxxx
Romios Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 1:58 PM
Hi there Regia..I started off the year on a good note. I hope you did, too! I like this kind..of poetry. Some like coboy poerty, fairies and gnomes. Cool, too. Some, religious, which is cool is great.. Check out the image. Love and peace, Pangie
Greenhough Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 8:52 AM
So much depth of love exudes from your poem. Great matches are few and far between. You're a lucky woman. Thank you for sharing this.
Romios Avatar
January 1, 2024 at 2:06 PM
Right on Hilda…. I wish that I could even improve on how expressed myself in this kind of poetry.. what I mean is that it would be even more powerful. By the way, I added an image since you saw it please take a look at it’s very pretty.. Have a good new year. , you are so supportive. Pabgie
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