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My Love-My Valentine

I want you to hold me in your arms, So I feel your body close to mine. Touch my lips with a thousand kisses, So I experience the taste of your love divine. To melt my heart with a burning passion That yearns for you with such intense desire, So that I softly yield in sweet surrender As we become one in love's eternal fire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/23/2012 12:58:00 PM
Very nice Sylvia
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Date: 2/23/2012 6:13:00 AM
Glad you like my Dr. "Jekyll". It's done in the 'diamante' form. Give it a try. It's fun. This valentine baby (yes, I was born on the big day) likes your Valentine poem above. ~Jim MeanderthalMan
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Date: 2/22/2012 1:02:00 PM
June, this is a beauty, lovely feel to it.. What a nice surprise to see you here today.. How are you doing? Love Wilma
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Date: 2/22/2012 6:36:00 AM
I'm guessing this poem is in the 'Story of a Valentine' contest? If it is I would be VERY surprised if this is not at least in the top 3!! This poem is amazing, and I loved reading it SOOOO much! It's really great, couldn't be better written! -AddieLynn
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