My Love

This love,
You wake up, youre eyes brighter then the heavens,
youre love kisses the stars goodnight,
i sing to you, oh so far way,
can you hear me cry, im desprete for only you,
youre warm smile, youre voice that can not be ever so unheard.
This one i know is my love.
Warm hugs, and kisses greet me so,
this is my love, the one i know.
ill never let this one go.
ill never, i promise u oh so so.
grab my hand, and ill take u anywhere in the world,
just you and me forever and always any where in the world,
just take my hand, baby take my hand we will fly to a faraway land.
Full of blossoms and sunny sky's and nothing but youre beutiful eyes gazeing in mine,
The light of the glow that makes you look ever so fine.
Boy, you light up my heart for miles and for endless years, these Loving tears, these loving 
tears. you make me cry, and we fight through it all,
These sadness molments that ,make me bawl.
I cry and you're here for me in every way,
Through every day, through every day.
This love that barriels inside of me and inside of my heart,
Will forever never ever be apart, it was this first love, that i knew was My true love, the one 
from the start barield in my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/13/2010 2:13:00 PM
first of all your spelling needs some major work. but you have some tallent you just have to decide to make it look good. and you will. jhl
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Date: 6/6/2010 12:59:00 PM
Nice use of words.Roger
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:08:00 AM
Well written ... very nice flow in the words.. and thanks for stopping by and reading mine..
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Date: 5/29/2010 4:35:00 PM
This is just so wonderfully expressed with love. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 5/29/2010 12:46:00 PM
beautiful write
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