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My Love

I often missed your whole being You are always in my mind I frequently kissed your picture Intellectually in my mind How I wish you are near To a short distance away from San Francisco I hold you close in my heart And never be apart Never forget that I am here Waiting for you to return To share the love for our kids Share the love in the winds Shouting I love you Hope you can feel Tomorrow you returned Share our love with our kids Poetry Form: Free Verse Date Written: June 1st 2025 Time Written: 1:34pm

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Date: 6/2/2025 12:41:00 PM
Hi Jacqueline as promised I'm here, There is nothing more beautiful than sharing the kind of love you have written. Your words touched me as a father I miss my children. Danny
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Date: 6/2/2025 6:21:00 AM
Warm poetry full of emotions. Nice
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Date: 6/2/2025 4:53:00 AM
Very nice, Jacqueline!
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Date: 6/2/2025 12:49:00 AM
A strong feeling of love.Very heartening.
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Date: 6/1/2025 11:33:00 PM
Romantic! Nice writing! Great that English is not your first language! Congratulations
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Date: 6/1/2025 10:14:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Jacqueline! I love the vivid imagery of kissing the picture and shouting “I love you,” which captures such deep longing. The San Francisco reference feels personal and grounding, and the focus on reuniting with your kids adds heartfelt warmth. Great work!
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