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A couple who are so different that they are on different poles. 

My Love

Your skin glows like apple blossoms crispy as the sunflower in the purest hope of spring. My yearning heart rises to your cymbals voice and leaps like a lion at the whisper of your name. The evening ascends in on a great vulture wing. I am calmed by your heavy ducking that I carry into the twilight of money beams and hold next to my pancreas. I am filled with hope that I may dry your tears of coke-a-cola. As my heart falls from your brain, I am reminded of your frown. In the hushed, I listen for the last splash of the spring. My heated gallbladder breathes inside my feet. I wait in the crystal moonlight for your secret toes so that we may seek as one, gallbladder to gallbladder, in search of the glorious rust sensual tools of love.
Poetry soup has a section on here that you can use called, "The love poem generator". I put in some words and boy did I laugh. LOL...
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Dutta Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 11:09 PM
Too tough for my imagination. I like the words ' crystal moonlight '' ' secret toes '
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 3:50 AM
Anisha, I wrote this using an aide on this site to write a love poem. It is down at the bottom of the page on the left side. LOL. I guess it is AI driven. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Empress Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 5:42 AM
“ leaps like a lion at the whisper of your name.” what a description! Brilliant how you delivered one that made me smile. Love generator? Where? Iv never seen it but you did show us what it can create! Well done dear sara! Sending you light always
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 10:50 AM
IE, glad it made you smile. I was hoping for ROTFL. Sara K
mysore Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 4:35 AM
you showed AI its place. 'my heated gallbladder breathes inside my feet'! never imagined it. thanks for the smile dear poet.
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 4:51 AM
Thriveni, Didn't you get a whopping laugh from that one. Sara K
Hind Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 3:33 PM
Aw, this is endearing! "Gallbladder to gallbladder"- who says the aged cannot be passionate! Beautiful-
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2024 at 2:48 AM
Paige, I can't stop laughing at what the love poem generator gave me. LOL..ROTFL..Sara K
Gifford Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 10:08 AM
Hi Sara, I was feeling in the dumps but reading your poem, I was smiling again as I pictured it. Just beautiful. Thank you for that. Have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Zyrool, I am glad you are smiling again. I ROTFL everytime I read it. LOL..Sara K
George Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 9:28 PM
"I am calmed by your heavy ducking that I carry into the twilight of money beams and hold next to my pancreas." This made me laugh out loud. Never knew you have such a funny bone in you, dear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 5:05 AM
Valsa, my husband likes to wear pants that are made of fabric that is like or is ducking so I put that in there to answer one of their questions. LOL..Amazing what AI came up with. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Beaufort Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 7:32 PM
Hah Ha, lots of laughs for sure. It's funny. Smiles!!
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 5:03 AM
Glad you got some laughs, Duke. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Swan Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 5:48 PM
Indeed! A bit like Google translate when it mishears you. Very funny ;) J
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2024 at 5:02 AM
I laughed and laughed. When I put those words in, I figured it would come back and say something like that doesn't compute. LOL..It wrote a poem with all those weird words. LOL..Thanks for the visit, Jeanette. Sara K
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