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My Loudest Feelings

A most terrible thing that brings me to tears, attacking my innermost soul Is the only time I ever feel that I could lose control It is when a human being injures or harms an innocent animal Who are these wicked evildoers, for what they have done is unbearable For animals show unconditional love to anyone they maybe with Such beautiful souls are sent from above, true love they will always give It rips me apart, almost breaking my heart, when I read of such evil atrocities I am so full of anger, feel physical pain, so helpless I feel I am going insane These creatures should not be called human, for they are the Devil incarnate I would lock them away for eternity, they do not deserve life, so incarcerate But deep down inside I’m a pacifist, finding anger and rage so draining As I visualize cruelty these morons have done, tears fall from my eyes as if raining In an ideal world these evil scum must be punished and their freedom taken As they rot in jail, will goodness prevail, as their conscience begins to awaken Can they express shame, regret or remorse, for the terrible acts they committed Could they be forgiven for the cruelty and pain on those innocent souls they inflicted But even then, they must never again have access to all nature’s creatures Must live their lives being supervised, in a place where only kindness features Written1st January 2019 Competition: My Loudest Feelings Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger 2nd place Standard Contest 545 Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/5/2019 6:23:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Ann.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/6/2019 5:26:00 AM
Many thanks Line for your congrats, bless you and kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/5/2019 10:15:00 AM
Back with congratulations my dear. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/6/2019 5:24:00 AM
Bless you Eve, always love your hugs.. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/5/2019 8:58:00 AM
Taking any living being and causing suffering is a wretched portrayal of life. The heart of Fur-mamas have the heart of God. Congrats on your win, Ann! I have a friend from church who is a kindred soul to all the downtrodden furry friends.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/6/2019 5:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim for your lovely comments I so appreciate your visit, bless you and kindest thoughts from Ann xx
Date: 12/31/2018 10:52:00 PM
Ann, I own a dog and like my child no one harms it. I even stand in front of a car if I know it isn't going to slow down on my street when I'm out there with him. nicely done and good luck in the contest. Be safe out there.. and have blessed new year. Hugs eve
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/1/2019 3:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve, sadly I no longer have a dog, but have had many wonderful characters in the past, plus guinea pigs, rabbits and tortoises, and I love and miss them all! Thanks for your hugs, sending kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 12/31/2018 8:16:00 PM
Wow, Ann. The perfect amount of passion.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/1/2019 3:40:00 AM
Thanks Line it is something I feel so strongly about for we are all Gods creatures. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

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