My Lonely Heart

In my heart I know I was right 
for believing in her for so long 
while every one was telling me 
that loving her was so wrong 

but the distance between us 
just made me love her more 
and instead of making me weak 
it made me stronger than before 

my family and friends keep saying 
that online love isn't real" its just virtual 
and that I need to feel someone breathe 
hold them close and get physical 

my friend's said that I am a fool 
being faithful to a girl I never met 
they says "man what she don't know 
wont hurt "so you got nothing to regret 

but that is not what I think of love 
so keep your stupid advice guys 
my lonely heart will wait for her 
as long as there're stars in the skies 

true love knows no distance 
age or color and race 
true love is about the heart and soul 
not about the among of make up on the face 

the beauty of love can makes you blush 
it can also makes you cry 
it can also hurt you so much 
you swear that you are going to die 

missing the one you love 
don't ever goes out of season 
it will hurt and hurt and hurt 
although you never meet them in person 

but you know in your lonely heart 
they are all that matters in the world 
for you feel god created them for you 
and then throw away the mold 

the girl that owns my heart 
I've never held her close to my chest 
feel her breath ,smells her fragrance 
touch her hair and or feel her caress 

and I don't know what she's in real 
because pictures can be doctored to lie 
and I really don't care about what I will meet 
I love her with all my heart till the day I die 

friends said to me" what if she don't like you 
what if she thinks you're ugly 
what if you if you wasted all this time 
and it turns out to be just a fantasy 

yes that could turn out be true 
I wont denied the thought never cross my mind 
and loving some one so much 
does makes your judgments blind 

but its a chance I will gladly take 
as long as there's stars above 
and I don't care what happens 
I finally felt what's its like to truly fall in love 

and I will always be faithful to her 
for as long as forever will take's 
I would wait and wait for the day we meet 
no matter how much my lonely heart breaks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/4/2014 5:56:00 PM
what a stunning stunning poem so many people can relate to falling in love with someone on line they have never met yet have such strong feelings for - some internet romances do work out - hope this one does:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/4/2014 9:24:00 PM
thank you very much jan...xx
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