My Little Ice Storm

Cold hands, warm heart
or so the saying goes.
But I've been told that through my veins
a river of ice only flows!

With the coldest of looks that could freeze you
at fifty yards and more
I'm told I have a heart of stone
that's chilled right to its core!

But this little ice show
does mask a fire that brews
one that threatens to slowly burn
then explode just like a fuse

So be grateful for my ice storm
a thaw can set in quick
but be careful where you start a flame
it might just be my wick!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/26/2011 1:56:00 AM
Wow I can't believe I missed so many of your new poems message me every time u post new poem if u can 7up I love this one
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Date: 4/6/2011 8:14:00 PM
You give fair warning here,Emma! Chills!! Way to go for you! Love your title for this one too and very cool metaphor you use!
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Date: 3/27/2011 1:08:00 PM
beautiful metaphors of wick and flame you have effectively used, enjoyed this powerful explosion of feelings with a ice storm, Emma
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Date: 3/27/2011 11:08:00 AM
Beneath that icy exterior, I'm sure you have a warm heart, Emma. I love the irony in this poem. If someone "melts your heart," he could be in for an explosion of passion. Great work here! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/27/2011 7:46:00 AM
Loved you little ice storm..Thank you for commenting on my poetry..Im going to try to find time to read all of yours! BG
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Date: 3/23/2011 5:55:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Emma. May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2011 2:40:00 AM
This is very good Emma. I love the way you have taken ice and fire and described yourself. Thanks for your comments dear.
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Date: 3/22/2011 2:18:00 PM
: ) I like this very much Emma! Well written Quatrain! Goes to my Favs. List. Thanks for the kind comment. Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/22/2011 1:01:00 PM
ha I like this...good way to convey your message...nice!
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:32:00 PM
really creative, loved reading this!
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Date: 3/22/2011 11:08:00 AM
awsomeness
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