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My Little Brown Friends

I have one of those near my neck Who greets me when I brush and shave I gave him a name (What the heck?) I'm proud of my brown-buddy-Dave But doc says watch out for this guy! Your friend may betray you someday And send you to heaven on high (I'm sure your insurance will pay) Sorry doc, I must take a pass Don't think I will pay your steep fee Don't think I'll go under your gas Ole' Dave's part of me, don-'cha see? (Got another brown pal more obscure Just where doth he dwell?..I won't tell Dave would GLADLY swap spots, I am sure When it rises to answer the bell) ***Submitted for Nikko's 'Mole' contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 10/26/2013 1:49:00 AM
Just landed on this one after trying to click on a new one. It's not a new one for me, but I still find it quite clever!!
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Date: 8/31/2010 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's contest.
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Date: 8/25/2010 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations Tim on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Holy Mole-y". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2010 7:34:00 AM
too cute, congrats on your win
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Date: 8/22/2010 8:05:00 PM
What a zinger for your ending in this humorous poem Tim. Congratulations on your win. Loved it! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:17:00 PM
hahaha. This was awesome. Congrats, Tim. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/22/2010 2:24:00 PM
A number #1 write to me I LOVE your sense of hummer LOL ;) Light & Love & congrads
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Date: 8/22/2010 2:14:00 PM
Congrats Tim on your big win in Nikko's contest... awesome as usual.. enjoyed as the new Mrs. "Sweetheart" on my wedded bliss night.. with luv..ciao..
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Date: 8/22/2010 5:43:00 AM
I hope Brown-Buddy Dave is still behaving, Tim. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2010 5:08:00 AM
Tim congratulations on your win with this funny write :)
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Date: 8/22/2010 5:07:00 AM
This was another funny write that I enjoyed reading, Tim-- loved how you named your moles-- how is Dave btw?? :) Congrats for being among my winners :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 8/22/2010 4:20:00 AM
Haha, many congratulations Tim on your win in Nikko's contest with this fine poem >> James
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Date: 8/15/2010 5:58:00 PM me smiling!
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Date: 8/8/2010 5:27:00 PM
LOL...naw git your hiney to the dermatologist!!!! Light & Love
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:14:00 PM
A "mole" contest? What will Soupers think of next. Reading this, I was thinking it might be a dog. Very clever, dear friend. Thanks again for sending that beautiful song. I was thinking about it and your thoughtfulness most of the day. Love, Carolyn (Best wishes in the contest)
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:43:00 PM
cute one , good luck in the contest
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