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My Light Will Find You

In a crowd  of  millions ,
my eyes will find you.
Before the darkness  descends
my light will find you. 
Before passion overpowers perseverence,
Before ecstacy inhales effervescence,
My soul would  merge  with you.
Before tender words succumbs to death
Before emotion engulfs your breath
I will make love to you 
In all the ways 
Love Red

Copyright © Red Fiery | Year Posted 2016

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Honestly J.T. Date: 12/26/2017 12:36:00 PM awesome poem -JT Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/23/2017 8:35:00 AM Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one again. Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 5/29/2016 11:32:00 AM quite a radiant light shines in your words excellent pen red wishing you a blessing of a day pal Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 5/1/2016 10:04:00 AM You are a very intense writer RF. All of your poems seem to have a personal and introspective feel that draws the reader in keeping them wanting more. You touch on my own fantasies in a personal way, for I, perhaps like you, live in my own fantasy world. You are a melancholic but passionate writer. I enjoy reading your work. Login to Reply

Anand Parmale Date: 3/24/2016 12:29:00 PM Awesome write RF Login to Reply

Paul Schneiter Date: 3/21/2016 6:42:00 AM Red, this is hauntingly lovely. I relish every line. Your bright poetic eyes have certainly found me. I love it. Thanks for your generosity in sharing it. Wonderful! Login to Reply

Viv Wigley Date: 3/14/2016 5:11:00 AM Unstoppable desire, love it. A fine piece, Red. Viv x Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/20/2016 8:16:00 AM thank you Viv...:)

Funom Makama Date: 3/13/2016 11:12:00 AM Epic, wonderful and outstanding. What a great share! Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/20/2016 8:16:00 AM Thank u :)

John-Ovan.P. Hull Date: 3/12/2016 10:22:00 AM You shouldn't need to try to find him, He should be chasing you after words like that! Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/20/2016 8:17:00 AM * blushing*

Paul Schneiter Date: 3/7/2016 7:22:00 AM Red, this is a lovely, emotionally powerful composition. I relished every line, and I think the title and concept are of surpassing excellence. Standing ovation! Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/7/2016 7:36:00 AM Thank you paul... I like to write about love, passion abd sometimes death and sorrow...glad that you liked this... Hugs Red

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/6/2016 9:21:00 PM Amazing feeling RED :) To find the one you love in a crowd, where nothing will get in your hearts desire way. A deep and FIERY end... Love LINDA Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/7/2016 7:36:00 AM You're a sweetheart :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/3/2016 3:16:00 PM Some gray comments! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/3/2016 8:02:00 PM I meant some great comments. Darn that spell correct *lol*

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/2/2016 1:07:00 PM - Beautifully written, Red :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/20/2016 8:17:00 AM thank u Anne..:)

Harry Horsman Date: 3/2/2016 3:56:00 AM Wow, you are back, Red this is amazing..don't get around much on soup anymore, but this poetry of yours sure is the lure. hope this time you stays. Soup is missing so many poets of your Calibre. Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/3/2016 7:52:00 PM Thank you harry...you have been kind to me ...:) Sometimes I get disappointed by negative comments but when I read comments from friends like you, I really feel uplifted...!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/1/2016 11:08:00 PM You do passion so well! Bravo! Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/3/2016 7:54:00 PM Thank you Richard ! You have been very supportive and I promise that I will continue to write...:)

Tim Smith Date: 3/1/2016 2:52:00 PM Very passionate and romantic...love the line "Before ecstasy inhales effervescence, My soul would merge with you." Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/7/2016 7:37:00 AM Thank you Tim...! I have read your poems... You're immensely talented

Paul Callus Date: 3/1/2016 2:50:00 PM Captivated by your light that shines throughout the whole poem; you use words to tempt and 'seduce' without ever crossing boundaries. Well done! ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/7/2016 7:38:00 AM I am flabbergasted to read your comments... Hugs red