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My light will find you



In a crowd  of  millions ,
my eyes will find you.
Before the darkness  descends
my light will find you. 
Before passion overpowers perseverence,
Before ecstacy inhales effervescence,
My soul would  merge  with you.
Before tender words succumbs to death
Before emotion engulfs your breath
I will make love to you 
In all the ways 
Love Red

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/26/2017 12:36:00 PM
awesome poem -JT
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Date: 12/23/2017 8:35:00 AM
Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one again.
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Date: 5/29/2016 11:32:00 AM
quite a radiant light shines in your words excellent pen red wishing you a blessing of a day pal
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Date: 5/1/2016 10:04:00 AM
You are a very intense writer RF. All of your poems seem to have a personal and introspective feel that draws the reader in keeping them wanting more. You touch on my own fantasies in a personal way, for I, perhaps like you, live in my own fantasy world. You are a melancholic but passionate writer. I enjoy reading your work.
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Date: 3/24/2016 12:29:00 PM
Awesome write RF
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Date: 3/21/2016 6:42:00 AM
Red, this is hauntingly lovely. I relish every line. Your bright poetic eyes have certainly found me. I love it. Thanks for your generosity in sharing it. Wonderful!
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Date: 3/14/2016 5:11:00 AM
Unstoppable desire, love it. A fine piece, Red. Viv x
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/20/2016 8:16:00 AM
thank you Viv...:)
Date: 3/13/2016 11:12:00 AM
Epic, wonderful and outstanding. What a great share!
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/20/2016 8:16:00 AM
Thank u :)
Date: 3/12/2016 10:22:00 AM
You shouldn't need to try to find him, He should be chasing you after words like that!
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/20/2016 8:17:00 AM
* blushing*
Date: 3/7/2016 7:22:00 AM
Red, this is a lovely, emotionally powerful composition. I relished every line, and I think the title and concept are of surpassing excellence. Standing ovation!
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/7/2016 7:36:00 AM
Thank you paul... I like to write about love, passion abd sometimes death and sorrow...glad that you liked this... Hugs Red
Date: 3/6/2016 9:21:00 PM
Amazing feeling RED :) To find the one you love in a crowd, where nothing will get in your hearts desire way. A deep and FIERY end... Love LINDA
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/7/2016 7:36:00 AM
You're a sweetheart :)
Date: 3/3/2016 11:13:00 PM
A lovely, passionate write, Red. T.J
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Date: 3/3/2016 3:16:00 PM
Some gray comments!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/3/2016 8:02:00 PM
I meant some great comments. Darn that spell correct *lol*
Date: 3/2/2016 1:07:00 PM
- Beautifully written, Red :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/20/2016 8:17:00 AM
thank u Anne..:)
Date: 3/2/2016 3:56:00 AM
Wow, you are back, Red this is amazing..don't get around much on soup anymore, but this poetry of yours sure is the lure. hope this time you stays. Soup is missing so many poets of your Calibre.
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/3/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thank you harry...you have been kind to me ...:) Sometimes I get disappointed by negative comments but when I read comments from friends like you, I really feel uplifted...!
Date: 3/1/2016 11:08:00 PM
You do passion so well! Bravo!
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/3/2016 7:54:00 PM
Thank you Richard ! You have been very supportive and I promise that I will continue to write...:)
Date: 3/1/2016 2:52:00 PM
Very passionate and romantic...love the line "Before ecstasy inhales effervescence, My soul would merge with you."
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/7/2016 7:37:00 AM
Thank you Tim...! I have read your poems... You're immensely talented
Date: 3/1/2016 2:50:00 PM
Captivated by your light that shines throughout the whole poem; you use words to tempt and 'seduce' without ever crossing boundaries. Well done! ~ Regards // paul
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/7/2016 7:38:00 AM
I am flabbergasted to read your comments... Hugs red