Red Fiery Poet Free verse

My Light Will Find You

In a crowd  of  millions ,
my eyes will find you.
Before the darkness  descends
my light will find you. 
Before passion overpowers perseverence,
Before ecstacy inhales effervescence,
My soul would  merge  with you.
Before tender words succumbs to death
Before emotion engulfs your breath
I will make love to you 
In all the ways 
Love Red

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Honestly J.T. December 26, 2017 at 12:36 PM awesome poem -JT

Richard Lamoureux December 23, 2017 at 8:35 AM Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one again.

Liam Mcdaid May 29, 2016 at 11:32 AM quite a radiant light shines in your words excellent pen red wishing you a blessing of a day pal

James Inman May 1, 2016 at 10:04 AM You are a very intense writer RF. All of your poems seem to have a personal and introspective feel that draws the reader in keeping them wanting more. You touch on my own fantasies in a personal way, for I, perhaps like you, live in my own fantasy world. You are a melancholic but passionate writer. I enjoy reading your work.

Anand Parmale March 24, 2016 at 12:29 PM Awesome write RF

Paul Schneiter March 21, 2016 at 6:42 AM Red, this is hauntingly lovely. I relish every line. Your bright poetic eyes have certainly found me. I love it. Thanks for your generosity in sharing it. Wonderful!

Viv Wigley March 14, 2016 at 5:11 AM Unstoppable desire, love it. A fine piece, Red. Viv x Red Fiery March 20, 2016 at 8:16 AM thank you Viv...:)

Funom Makama March 13, 2016 at 11:12 AM Epic, wonderful and outstanding. What a great share! Red Fiery March 20, 2016 at 8:16 AM Thank u :)

John-Ovan.P. Hull March 12, 2016 at 10:22 AM You shouldn't need to try to find him, He should be chasing you after words like that! Red Fiery March 20, 2016 at 8:17 AM * blushing*

Paul Schneiter March 7, 2016 at 7:22 AM Red, this is a lovely, emotionally powerful composition. I relished every line, and I think the title and concept are of surpassing excellence. Standing ovation! Red Fiery March 7, 2016 at 7:36 AM Thank you paul... I like to write about love, passion abd sometimes death and sorrow...glad that you liked this... Hugs Red

Poet Destroyer A March 6, 2016 at 9:21 PM Amazing feeling RED :) To find the one you love in a crowd, where nothing will get in your hearts desire way. A deep and FIERY end... Love LINDA Red Fiery March 7, 2016 at 7:36 AM You're a sweetheart :)

Richard Lamoureux March 3, 2016 at 3:16 PM Some gray comments! Richard Lamoureux March 3, 2016 at 8:02 PM I meant some great comments. Darn that spell correct *lol*

Anne-Lise Andresen March 2, 2016 at 1:07 PM - Beautifully written, Red :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Red Fiery March 20, 2016 at 8:17 AM thank u Anne..:)

Harry Horsman March 2, 2016 at 3:56 AM Wow, you are back, Red this is amazing..don't get around much on soup anymore, but this poetry of yours sure is the lure. hope this time you stays. Soup is missing so many poets of your Calibre. Red Fiery March 3, 2016 at 7:52 PM Thank you harry...you have been kind to me ...:) Sometimes I get disappointed by negative comments but when I read comments from friends like you, I really feel uplifted...!

Richard Lamoureux March 1, 2016 at 11:08 PM You do passion so well! Bravo! Red Fiery March 3, 2016 at 7:54 PM Thank you Richard ! You have been very supportive and I promise that I will continue to write...:)

Tim Smith March 1, 2016 at 2:52 PM Very passionate and romantic...love the line "Before ecstasy inhales effervescence, My soul would merge with you." Red Fiery March 7, 2016 at 7:37 AM Thank you Tim...! I have read your poems... You're immensely talented

Paul Callus March 1, 2016 at 2:50 PM Captivated by your light that shines throughout the whole poem; you use words to tempt and 'seduce' without ever crossing boundaries. Well done! ~ Regards // paul Red Fiery March 7, 2016 at 7:38 AM I am flabbergasted to read your comments... Hugs red