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My Life Was Such...!

Ohh...Lord why does it hurt so much..?? My life was such..!! It was such a wonderful world just a while back..; It was all joy and sadness was what lacked..!! It was my world on the clouds..; With smiles all around..!! The clouds showered happiness, The sun added the light, Sorrows nowhere to be seen, And darkness nowhere in sight..!! My life was such, then why..!! Ohh...Lord why does it hurt so much..?? My love was such..!! It made even the Gods take a pause..; And made the angels look small..; Ohh...The glow on her face..; Made the Sun feel shy..!! The moon felt jealous..; As she asked who gave her the beauty better than mine..?? Myl ove was such, then why..!! She made me happy..; She made me proud..; And most of all she made me complete..; And not a part of the crowd..!! But now she is gone..; And as my heart dies slow..!! All my happiness is drained..; As my life lost its entire glow..!! The word love in my life has been stained..!! My life was such, then why..!! Ohh...Lord why does it hurt so much..?? No matter where you are..; No matter what you do..!! No matter where I am ..; In this world or the next..!! My love for you will never change; I loved you then, I love you now..; And I will always love you the same..!!

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Date: 2/13/2009 5:51:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem filled with love and a desire for one gone..you have written this very well my friend and the voice in this piece conveys it well.
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