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My Life Story - Part 1

I grew up in a normal family, A story told by different people, with the same affinity. Grew along with the same saying, "The richer gets richer and the poor gets poorer". Never did I care to look into the latter side, Never did I weep for those impecunious. All along I was enticed in the richness, That never did I know I will fall below. Then did I know what it felt like, Being indigent, hungry, thirsty and in solitude. A light of hope was sent from above, I gained my strength to fight back, Not to be enticed in the same richness, But for those dwelling below just as I was.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/5/2024 8:06:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/20/2016 11:42:00 PM
danie, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/15/2015 3:21:00 PM
enjoyed this one Allen, Luv p.d.
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Allen Danie
Date: 7/18/2015 4:08:00 AM
Thank you for passing by p.d :) A~D
Date: 7/10/2015 3:53:00 PM
You held my interest in your story right to the end with superb imagery. Emile.
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Allen Danie
Date: 7/12/2015 9:37:00 PM
Thank you Emile for your comment .Hoped you liked it :) A~D
Date: 7/10/2015 4:24:00 AM
I'm looking forward to reading the next part of the story Allen - I particularly like the final stanza in your verse - and there definitely is more to life than money:-) hugs Jan xx
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Allen Danie
Date: 7/12/2015 9:38:00 PM
Hoped you like it Jan. Next part will come soon :) A~D

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