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my life in 20 words


had a good childhood
was an awkward teen
did well in school
worked hard played hard
found then lost love



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Daniel Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 12:55 AM
This is succinctly said, Line, though I'm sure it's filled with memories, both good and bad:)
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 5:35 AM
lol ~ yes, all between the lines
Vaso Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 11:04 PM
I loved this, in 4 lines you said a novel.
Gauthier Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 11:17 AM
lol ~ lots to read between the lines
George Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 9:57 PM
So, you have beautifully summed up your long life in capsule form. Have a great week ahead.
Gauthier Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 11:17 AM
Much appreciated, Valsa ~
Dietrich Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 4:20 PM
Oh wow. I like this idea. Five is my number. And I have been thinking of a contest idea. Hmmm maybe I can have poets do something similar to this!
Gauthier Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 11:18 AM
sounds good ~ would be great to see the variety ~ I'm sure most would be more exciting than mine ~ lol
Lane Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 8:03 AM
Line, there is SO much more to you, but I acknowledge the 4 words per line form you've chosen to use.
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 10:54 AM
lol ~ I had not noticed ! Thanks for your visit and comment, Lin ~
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