The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide

My Life As a Smoke Ring

With a nice cigar
I blow a perfect smoke ring,
And the ring holds briefly.  

I consider that focus of energy-- 
The snapping of my jaw.
The ring succumbs to the evening:

       Hard-edged blue smoke
       Burns off the hot stick end
       Soft volumes of gray puffed circles 
       Spew forth as the moment calls
       To live out their perfect circle lives
       Then be annihilated
       Unnoticed
       By mere confusions
       In the cool night breeze 

I consider my House
Pieces of life drawn together 
Of more dynamic forces.

Energies which held together Home
Decay
In the same way the smoke ring is gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Callus Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Your smoke ring metaphor has certainly attracted my attention, Dalton. An excellent reminiscent poem. Such is life! Regards // paul
Moss Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 12:12 PM
Thanks Paul! As the smoke ring said, It's nicer to not be "unnoticed." Cheers!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 7:53 PM
It is amazing how we do not see the whole picture but this is it. " Spew forth as the moment calls To live out their perfect circle lives Then be annihilated Unnoticed" yes! Great job!
Moss Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 1:52 AM
Thanks Caren. Noticed.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 3:20 PM
Great, evocative piece!
Moss Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 1:50 AM
Thank you, Maureen!
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