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My Life a Vapor

my life a vapor
wrapped in experiences
always upward bound

written December 21, 2021

hopelifesenryu

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Caren Krutsinger

December 23, 2021 at 1:11 AM

This is optimistic Hank and likeable!

L Milton Hankins

December 23, 2021 at 8:40 AM

That's for sure. I am basically a very optimistic person. I have S.A.D. but I fight it, and I figure I have so much to be optimistic about. I can no longer concern myself with what other people are doing to make themselves and others miserable. "Don't worry; be happy!" is going to be my 2022 motto!

Bill Baker

December 21, 2021 at 5:33 PM

Nice Senryu, Milt. I like the direction the poem is heading. Write On! Bill

L Milton Hankins

December 21, 2021 at 7:06 PM

Aw, that's so nice of you to say, Bill. Thanks so much.

Connie Marcum Wong

December 21, 2021 at 2:21 PM

I really enjoyed the positivity of imagining the vapor floating upward in this marvelous senryu Milton. Wonderful! Blessings xxoo

L Milton Hankins

December 21, 2021 at 2:58 PM

Thank you so much, Connie, for your visit and for your thoughtful comment.

Andrea Dietrich

December 21, 2021 at 12:46 PM

Very cool!! Love this one.

L Milton Hankins

December 21, 2021 at 1:12 PM

Andrea, thanks! Lots of hope in those three small lines!

Constance La France

December 21, 2021 at 12:36 PM

Milt, a lovely senryu ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

L Milton Hankins

December 21, 2021 at 1:12 PM

Thank you, Constance. I'm so pleased that you liked it. Peace and tranquility back at you!

Lin Lane

December 21, 2021 at 11:09 AM

Like steam heat. Hot stuff, Milt. lol

L Milton Hankins

December 21, 2021 at 1:13 PM

Sort of, Lin. It just dawned on me that, once upon a time, vapor had an entirely different meaning!

Tom Cunningham

December 21, 2021 at 10:40 AM

Well you certainly wouldn't be going the other way that's for sure Milton I'm sure you've had many experiences that have molded you the way you are. Tom

L Milton Hankins

December 21, 2021 at 1:20 PM

Well, I hope not, Tom. But, does one ever really know? I wrote a light verse this morning about the judgment day which I will post when the site allows me to. I think the humor suppresses the wondering.

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