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My Life

The tears shed and wiped It builds character The endurance of pain It moulds strength The obstacles along the way It emphasises the sights The challenges faced everyday It sets the process in motion A task at hand It needs consideration A heart felt story It needs to be written A adaption to the environment It needs to be executed The noticeable weakness It formulates the personality The wind that blows seasonally It signifies change The rain that pours uncontrollably It alerts what is to be The memories that are to be distinguished It innovates remembrance

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/29/2019 5:48:00 PM

Hello Sibusisiwe Ncede,it is nice to know that tears build character. Does the tears in the past shed count?Or is it the tears of the now?Just wondering. Nice to meet you. Welcome to Poetry Soup.Have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/30/2019 2:48:00 PM

sibusisiwe Ncede,your comment makes a lot of sense.I never give up I build up instead. I try to be positive in my thinking every day. I do affirmation and mediate. I find it relaxing. have a nice evening my friend.

Sibusisiwe LETA Ncede
Date: 7/30/2019 3:52:00 AM

Hi Darlene It depends on the individual,you can choose to give up or to build you up.Due to painful circumstances,you can become weaker or you can become stronger,it all depends on your mind set.Enjoy your day!!!!