My Life

The tears shed and wiped
It builds character
The endurance of pain
It moulds strength
The obstacles along the way
It emphasises the sights
The challenges faced everyday
It sets the process in motion

A task at hand
It needs consideration
A heart felt story
It needs to be written
A adaption to the environment
It needs to be executed

The noticeable weakness
It formulates the personality
The wind that blows seasonally
It signifies change
The rain that pours uncontrollably
It alerts what is to be
The memories that are to be distinguished
It innovates remembrance

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Date: 7/29/2019 5:48:00 PM
Hello Sibusisiwe Ncede,it is nice to know that tears build character. Does the tears in the past shed count?Or is it the tears of the now?Just wondering. Nice to meet you. Welcome to Poetry Soup.Have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/30/2019 2:48:00 PM
sibusisiwe Ncede,your comment makes a lot of sense.I never give up I build up instead. I try to be positive in my thinking every day. I do affirmation and mediate. I find it relaxing. have a nice evening my friend.
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Sibusisiwe LETA Ncede
Date: 7/30/2019 3:52:00 AM
Hi Darlene It depends on the individual,you can choose to give up or to build you up.Due to painful circumstances,you can become weaker or you can become stronger,it all depends on your mind set.Enjoy your day!!!!
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