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My Letter To You

Eyes they sparkled infused with life Your very soul my guiding light Impish smile that sealed the deal My heart restored by words surreal Loving heart so warm and true You shelter my hurts that's what you do That smile that makes my body ache Laughter between us burns it radiates George and Gracie their love we exude Honey you're nuts I love you it's true Loving support selfless so you My rock so strong that's what you do Charming as Bond but sexier than AL I can tell you Honey you're hot as hell Your moves they lift my spirit high Your song you sing is my favourite lullaby Your home you lovingly so graciously share I feel so protected safe in your care I Love You! Your my guardian angel My best friend My treasure My true find Honey I thank you! God Bless you, sweet kisses I sign xoxo

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Pipping Stars

Date: 9/2/2017 8:08:00 PM

God bless you to ... felt great ... oh his goodness too ... huh ...

Carol B.
Date: 9/9/2017 2:21:00 PM

Thanks! :)

Funom Makama

Date: 7/4/2017 8:57:00 AM

Oh my goodness! This is why I always miss your work when I stay away from this site for a while. Your choice of words and perfect blend of a cute message is beyond description. This is definitely good..

Carol B.
Date: 7/19/2017 7:25:00 PM

Funom, Thanks for the kind comment. You made my day! :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 5/23/2017 1:14:00 AM

Well done (7) -JT

Carol B.
Date: 5/25/2017 3:44:00 PM

Thanks :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/14/2017 11:26:00 AM

This love poem you wrote brought to my eyes tears. Thisis a beautiful love poem. A 7

Carol B.
Date: 5/15/2017 2:54:00 PM

Thank you so much for the touching comment. :)

Carole Duet

Date: 5/12/2017 2:41:00 PM

What a great tribute to one who is loved and it is so sweet, Carol. I have one suggestion though: change "Honey your nuts" to "Honey you're nuts" because in that line "you're" means "you are" and is a contraction, not a possessive pronoun as it is in the other lines.

Carol B.
Date: 5/13/2017 2:11:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Carl Jent

Date: 5/3/2017 4:20:00 PM

What a lovely poem. THe flow was smooth and meaning through out. What a lucky guy. Very good

Carol B.
Date: 5/5/2017 6:09:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2017 11:17:00 PM

you are in LOVE. GREAT tribute for your honey!!

Carol B.
Date: 4/30/2017 2:29:00 PM

Thanks Andrea :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/26/2017 8:32:00 PM

Boy I hope the person in the poem isn't going to get angry, or anything like that if you know what I mean. Also as an aside I really like Joe Cocker's version of 'with a little help from my friends'. I don't know what that means I just felt like saying it.

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 10:34:00 PM

No worries this is all in fun. He has a heart of gold and is really happy for me. You have great taste in music. I really like Joe Cocker's singing and love that song. :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/26/2017 8:28:00 PM

Oh yeah also...well you know...like...ahhhh...Congratulations.

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 10:27:00 PM

Thanks so much. I was thrilled to be POTD.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/26/2017 8:27:00 PM

Right! Well sorry than.

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 10:25:00 PM

No worries :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/26/2017 8:26:00 PM

My last comment sounded a bit arrogant didn't it. Actually really arrogant, self absorbed, conceited and a whole bunch more words in that vein...in fact vane would probably fit too.

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 10:25:00 PM

You're being far to hard on yourself lol. Actually this comment is very entertaining:)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/26/2017 8:22:00 PM

Coming back to Congratulate you on me Congratulating you on your write being chosen poem of the day.

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 10:22:00 PM

Lol okay that is really funny:) very sweet of you!

Bernard F. Asuncion

Date: 4/26/2017 7:03:00 PM

What a lovely poem..... congrats on being chosen....

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 10:35:00 PM

Thank so much!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/26/2017 6:12:00 PM

Coming back just to congratulate you on your POTD dear, Carol!

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 10:36:00 PM

So very kind of you Demetrois! Thanks again :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/26/2017 5:23:00 PM

Congratulations on having this wonderful poem honored as POTD! ; )

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 10:37:00 PM

I appreciate your support! Thanks again :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/26/2017 5:12:00 PM

what a fabulous letter Carol so full of love but also with humour which is so important in a relationship:-) Many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 10:40:00 PM

I love that we can laugh at ourselves and with one another :). Humour is so important. Thanks for the lovely comment Jan.

Gordon Alexander

Date: 4/26/2017 12:56:00 PM

Lovely writing well done

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 2:25:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Jannie Breedt

Date: 4/26/2017 12:48:00 PM

Hi Carl. Whopee you made potd. I dig this poeem that xould easily double as a song. The exuberance is so honest and joyful

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 2:46:00 PM

I am thrilled you liked my poem Jannie. Thanks so much for your kind comment and always being so supportive. :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/26/2017 11:14:00 AM

Hi Carol, What a beautiful and romantic letter. Congratulations on your poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 2:48:00 PM

Thank you! I really appreciate your comment Alexis. :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/26/2017 10:09:00 AM

Congrats on your POTD, Carol.

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 2:49:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/26/2017 9:57:00 AM

You can truly feel the sincere devotion in this love letter. I can imagine it will be copied and sent to other lovers by others.

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 2:51:00 PM

Wow! Thank you for the compliment :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/26/2017 9:16:00 AM

Congratulations! What a terrific poem of the day!

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 2:55:00 PM

Thanks! This has made my day :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 4/26/2017 8:57:00 AM

To be loved is the greatest and priceless feeling in the world. A define sweet love, Carol! Congrats :)

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 3:01:00 PM

Akkina, I totally agree with you. Thank you! :)

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 4/26/2017 8:49:00 AM

Filled with love and adoration,its lovely Carol!

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 3:01:00 PM

Thank you! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/26/2017 8:30:00 AM

- Carol, a lovely poem :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol B.
Date: 4/26/2017 3:06:00 PM

Thanks :)