Carol B. Poet Free verse

My Letter To You

Eyes they sparkled infused with life 
Your very soul my guiding light
Impish smile that sealed the deal 
My heart restored by words surreal

Loving heart so warm and true
You shelter my hurts that's what you do

That smile that makes my body ache
Laughter between us burns it radiates
George and Gracie their love we exude 
Honey you're nuts I love you it's true

Loving support selfless so you
My rock so strong that's what you do

Charming as Bond but sexier than AL
I can tell you Honey you're hot as hell
Your moves they lift my spirit high
Your song you sing is my favourite lullaby 

Your home you lovingly so graciously share
I feel so protected safe in your care

I   Love  You!
Your my guardian angel
My best friend
My treasure 
My true find

Honey I thank you!
God Bless you, 
sweet kisses 
I sign 
xoxo

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Pipping Stars September 2, 2017 at 8:08 PM God bless you to ... felt great ... oh his goodness too ... huh ... Carol B. September 9, 2017 at 2:21 PM Thanks! :)

Funom Makama July 4, 2017 at 8:57 AM Oh my goodness! This is why I always miss your work when I stay away from this site for a while. Your choice of words and perfect blend of a cute message is beyond description. This is definitely good.. Carol B. July 19, 2017 at 7:25 PM Funom, Thanks for the kind comment. You made my day! :)

Honestly J.T. May 23, 2017 at 1:14 AM Well done (7) -JT Carol B. May 25, 2017 at 3:44 PM Thanks :)

Darlene De Beaulieu May 14, 2017 at 11:26 AM This love poem you wrote brought to my eyes tears. Thisis a beautiful love poem. A 7 Carol B. May 15, 2017 at 2:54 PM Thank you so much for the touching comment. :)

Carole Duet May 12, 2017 at 2:41 PM What a great tribute to one who is loved and it is so sweet, Carol. I have one suggestion though: change "Honey your nuts" to "Honey you're nuts" because in that line "you're" means "you are" and is a contraction, not a possessive pronoun as it is in the other lines. Carol B. May 13, 2017 at 2:11 PM Thank you! :)

Carl Jent May 3, 2017 at 4:20 PM What a lovely poem. THe flow was smooth and meaning through out. What a lucky guy. Very good Carol B. May 5, 2017 at 6:09 PM Thank you! :)

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2017 at 11:17 PM you are in LOVE. GREAT tribute for your honey!! Carol B. April 30, 2017 at 2:29 PM Thanks Andrea :)

Maurice Yvonne April 26, 2017 at 8:32 PM Boy I hope the person in the poem isn't going to get angry, or anything like that if you know what I mean. Also as an aside I really like Joe Cocker's version of 'with a little help from my friends'. I don't know what that means I just felt like saying it. Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 10:34 PM No worries this is all in fun. He has a heart of gold and is really happy for me. You have great taste in music. I really like Joe Cocker's singing and love that song. :)

Maurice Yvonne April 26, 2017 at 8:28 PM Oh yeah also...well you know...like...ahhhh...Congratulations. Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 10:27 PM Thanks so much. I was thrilled to be POTD.

Maurice Yvonne April 26, 2017 at 8:27 PM Right! Well sorry than. Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 10:25 PM No worries :)

Maurice Yvonne April 26, 2017 at 8:26 PM My last comment sounded a bit arrogant didn't it. Actually really arrogant, self absorbed, conceited and a whole bunch more words in that vein...in fact vane would probably fit too. Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 10:25 PM You're being far to hard on yourself lol. Actually this comment is very entertaining:)

Maurice Yvonne April 26, 2017 at 8:22 PM Coming back to Congratulate you on me Congratulating you on your write being chosen poem of the day. Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 10:22 PM Lol okay that is really funny:) very sweet of you!

Bernardo F. Asuncion April 26, 2017 at 7:03 PM What a lovely poem..... congrats on being chosen.... Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 10:35 PM Thank so much!

Demetrios Trifiatis April 26, 2017 at 6:12 PM Coming back just to congratulate you on your POTD dear, Carol! Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 10:36 PM So very kind of you Demetrois! Thanks again :)

Connie Marcum Wong April 26, 2017 at 5:23 PM Congratulations on having this wonderful poem honored as POTD! ; ) Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 10:37 PM I appreciate your support! Thanks again :)

Jan Allison April 26, 2017 at 5:12 PM what a fabulous letter Carol so full of love but also with humour which is so important in a relationship:-) Many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 10:40 PM I love that we can laugh at ourselves and with one another :). Humour is so important. Thanks for the lovely comment Jan.

Gordon Alexander April 26, 2017 at 12:56 PM Lovely writing well done Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 2:25 PM Thank you! :)

Jannie Breedt April 26, 2017 at 12:48 PM Hi Carl. Whopee you made potd. I dig this poeem that xould easily double as a song. The exuberance is so honest and joyful Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 2:46 PM I am thrilled you liked my poem Jannie. Thanks so much for your kind comment and always being so supportive. :)

Alexis Y. April 26, 2017 at 11:14 AM Hi Carol, What a beautiful and romantic letter. Congratulations on your poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 2:48 PM Thank you! I really appreciate your comment Alexis. :)

Agnes Krampe April 26, 2017 at 10:09 AM Congrats on your POTD, Carol. Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 2:49 PM Thank you! :)

Sunlite Wanter April 26, 2017 at 9:57 AM You can truly feel the sincere devotion in this love letter. I can imagine it will be copied and sent to other lovers by others. Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 2:51 PM Wow! Thank you for the compliment :)

Maurice Yvonne April 26, 2017 at 9:16 AM Congratulations! What a terrific poem of the day! Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 2:55 PM Thanks! This has made my day :)

Akkina Downing April 26, 2017 at 8:57 AM To be loved is the greatest and priceless feeling in the world. A define sweet love, Carol! Congrats :) Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 3:01 PM Akkina, I totally agree with you. Thank you! :)

Sara Chansarkar April 26, 2017 at 8:49 AM Filled with love and adoration,its lovely Carol! Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 3:01 PM Thank you! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2017 at 8:30 AM - Carol, a lovely poem :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 3:06 PM Thanks :)

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