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My Last Moment With Daddy

I looked past the priest and saw auntie and grandma. They were cuddled, holding each other up. Grandma being Catholic was wearing her purple scarf. Even though Daddy’s funeral was outside, a priest was here. Auntie Maria was holding her red umbrella. It was sprinkling, of course. It always sprinkles during a D’agosto funeral. Ask any D’agosto and they will admit this. Behind my relatives I saw a younger lady bent over flowers. She was touching them in a delicate, respectful, lovely way. Marigolds and carnations. I thought I might see her face, but didn’t. The priest droned on. He was trying to save us. Everyone seemed to wear flowers today, lots of calicos and cottons. I was wearing a plain black dowdy dress chosen by my mother. I saw Daddy behind the flower lady. He waved before he disappeared. I was only six but I have always remembered that last moment with him.

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Date: 9/27/2020 1:21:00 PM
oh you just made me cry and I am not a crier..very touching..it's amazing how vivid those early memories are and I am so sorry you lost your dad at such an early, early age.. I wanted to also thank you for taking the time to comment on several of my poems..it means a lot to me..stay safe and keep doing what your doing out there..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2020 2:41:00 AM
Actually this story was fabricated, I lost my daddy when I was sixty. I am sorry that you almost cried. My imagination and Trixie have a knack for this.

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