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My Lamplighter

She was in her early teens She looked like a bouquet of morning But twinkles were crumbling in her sheen The flowers in her eyes looked deserted by the sun From some source she had heard I could reorient the windows of her thought Could guide her to turn her shadows into sunshine Making her eyebrows and smile free from many a remorse In the ensuing psychoanalytic encounter The old began to peep out in the daylight struggle I tried to liberate her introverted unconscious conflicts In an empathic elucidation of her secured subterranean world Abruptly the eye to eye lamp went out one day ‘Today you are a lecturer, sir, not a sharer of my mind’ Taken a little aback at first though, I could then painfully feel I had in my ardor brought out the midday sun instead of the cool stars A teenager that day opened a new door for me Like a poem of love, bread and flowers you have to be Like many a soft murmur in the playful currents of the deep blue sea If you are indeed in an empathy with a view to eliminating a deep seated injury _______________________________________________________________ 20/02/2017 For the poetry contest: Younger people who have inspired you Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri-Carroll

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Date: 2/23/2017 2:59:00 PM
An excellent write, Probir! You treat this theme with a unique creative mind. Indeed...your lamplighter! // paul
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/24/2017 4:30:00 AM
Thank you, Paul ...
Date: 2/21/2017 6:34:00 AM
Wonderfully said! Teenagers are a whole new territory. Blessings my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/21/2017 11:01:00 AM
Thank you ...

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