Melani Udaeta Poet Dodoitsu

My Lagoon

Oh magnificent lagoon  
the wonderful rush of calm,
All my troubles disappear
as my dreams begin 

Oh beautiful waterfall
you are a scene from my dreams,
Such sparkle under sunlight!
gone when I wake up


Melani Udaeta
Natural Dodoitsu Contest

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Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2013 at 9:21 PM Melani, this is sure nice!! Love that line: wonderful rush of calm. Congrats on the win!

Skat A January 12, 2013 at 12:15 PM Melani, , congratulations with your awesome win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2013 at 10:01 PM MELANI, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

Barbara Gorelick January 11, 2013 at 12:16 AM Congrats on your placement. I love your dream. BG

Sara Kendrick January 10, 2013 at 5:27 PM Creative winning work..Enjoyed reading ..Congrats..Sara

Joyce Johnson January 9, 2013 at 9:02 PM Congratulations on your happy dodoitsu and big win. Love, joyce

Audrey Haick January 9, 2013 at 2:31 PM Congratulations on your fantastic win, Melani! Always, Annalise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 9, 2013 at 1:11 PM Congratulations on your winning spot Melani love xx

Poet Destroyer A December 26, 2012 at 8:39 PM Melani, i like this image... the canvas here made me want to sleep under this beautiful sunlight. a good thing about dreams is, that you can go back every night.. if your mind allows... enjoyed... and good luck..pd