My Knight 'Titanium'

 
Those light blue eyes I still remember, they'd stare into mine when I was seven, your touch of silk in crystal white hair, I'd named you 'Titanium', my silver knight. We grew up together walking in the woods, you'd eat soaked bread from a blue cup; thrilled by sounds of distant trains at night, we'd stay awake until I snored on your back. I read next to you while you nuzzled my feet, your tinkling paws I traced in wet garden, you sniffed marigold when Spring was near, I'd chase you to your place with pigeons. The last Winter together I would never forget, we ran around fireflies on our little terrace, you dozed off with me never to wake up again, that wretched morning passed by but I still cry.
August 12, 2020 All Pets Go To Heaven Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France ~Winner: 2nd Place

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Date: 8/31/2020 10:20:00 AM
Aditi, congratulations on your win in my All Pets Go To Heaven Challenge with this emotional write, it truly touched my heart _Constance
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Date: 8/26/2020 9:42:00 AM
A difficult moment for any child to live through, you have memorialized your Titanium so well here, Aditi. Herein lies one of the deepest values of poetry: to diffuse some of the pain by writing about it and by sharing it with others, who may be able to empathize. Congratulations for your placement, my poetry friend ~ John
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Date: 8/25/2020 12:16:00 PM
- Many wonderful memories, Aditi :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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