My Journey

Dear Computer, have I told you what a great friend you have been? How you tackle my emotions, turn them sometimes to a win? Having retired from my career and job of nearly thirty years, I'd already had my share of joys, more than enough of tears. The computer age was just beginning, quite a bit too late for me. I didn't know you were a brand new way of living vicariously. Perhaps I had a latent talent that I hadn't recognized And more of a yen for poetry than I had realized When my son brought a word processor in Nineteen Ninety-nine And asked me to write my memoirs. No way did I divine The storm of words that would spew forth, the enjoyment waiting there, Or the many friends that I would find, who would be glad to share. In less than a month my son had died. He did not live to know What a wonder he had given me. I wish that I could show The honors I have garnered on these pages and on more. My humble poems have been read in this land from shore to shore. Poets from other nations have reached out to hold my hand When I wrote of loss and sorrow, just to say they understand. My first poems were sad and mournful, for I had lost my son. It was a way of healing and soon I had begun To try out the forms and flavors that would make me a poet true I'm old enough to be great-grandma, but as a poet, fairly new. Dear computer you now work over-time, every evening after dinner. I'm happily entering contests and striving for a winner. Rewritten: For this contest 4/2/15
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April 18, 2015 at 6:52 PM
Joyce, Congratulations on your fine win. LINDA
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April 18, 2015 at 8:00 AM
For me this is truly worth the first placement, the best I have read so far. Moving and significant, you are a true poet!
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April 17, 2015 at 8:22 PM
Sorry for you loss, congrats on your poem and win!
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April 17, 2015 at 1:51 AM
Congs on your Computer Poem Dear one The first stanza is a good start, and i loved it My empathy for the loss of your son #Joyce Bryan Loves
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 10:32 PM
I think yours is the most sentimental of all the entries. I just love it, Joyce. your pure emotions shine through. Congrats
Haight Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 3:49 PM
So emotional, Joyce. You are to be commended for the wonderful journey you took of becoming a poet, which your dear son began for you with giving you that computer...I love your poem, and am sending my heartfelt congratulations to you for your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 2:18 PM
I found this such an emotional write Joyce - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 9:51 AM
WOW, it was great to see this because I too started right after 1999, Joyce. I swear you are like a soul sister of mine! Congratulations to you.
M V Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 8:33 PM
This is a fine piece,Joyce.Congratulations on your win!
Brown Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Michael's "What brought you to poetry" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 10:37 AM
My thanks goes out to your son for bringing you the word processor. What a loss it would have been to all of us if you had never touched us with your words. Congratulations
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December 8, 2011 at 8:02 AM
Your Journey is a bittersweet one.. many have traveled this road but your words describe it just right.... xoxoo Michael
Richards Avatar
December 3, 2011 at 9:41 AM
And indeed a winner you have written once again, dear Joyce. Like you, I had never written before, and was surprised by how much I held within, when first getting my computer late in life. Your poems have been a gift to all of us! Happy Holidays Joyce!!
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