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My Journey

The drivers of my journey bring me to here, somewhere between yesterday and tomorrow, alive, leaving a trail of blame, pain, shame, accountability, restitution and change. Living life with less selfishness and self-will, sufficiently provides all daily needs. Driven by free choice, fate and faith to an unknown future - I'll arrive on time - I'll be okay. July 4, 2018 Eight Lines of Fate... Contest by Silent One Second Place

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/21/2018 9:47:00 PM

Well penned. Congrats on your podium finish, Susan.

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/22/2018 5:40:00 AM

Thanks, Line.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/21/2018 7:25:00 AM

Congrats Susan for your top win with this wonderful poem.

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/22/2018 5:39:00 AM

Thank you so much!

Curtis Moorman

Date: 7/20/2018 1:22:00 PM

I had no doubt I'd see your name high on the list. Congratulations, Susan!

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/21/2018 12:15:00 AM

Thank you Curtis! I still have a long way to go to get this but you helped me so much! Thank you!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 7/20/2018 12:20:00 AM

Congratulations, Susan on your great win. I liked the optimism.

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/20/2018 2:38:00 AM

Thank you.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/19/2018 11:10:00 PM

Congratulations, Susan, on your win, well done!

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/20/2018 2:38:00 AM

Thank you.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/19/2018 2:45:00 PM

This is a really nice take for the contest I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem of yours, good luck and have a really nice day

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/19/2018 8:23:00 PM

Thank you! Same to you. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/19/2018 7:45:00 AM

- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/19/2018 8:22:00 PM

Thank you so very much!