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I ride the vibrant crests Of a tangerine moon Glowing across stardust ridges Where inspiration tickles My heart with laughing dewdrops I drift on the edge of a smiling Emerald forest filled with Whispery pines and strong oaks All the trees remind me why The birds make a home on branches With their bristling, dancing leaves I walk through a thriving garden Alive with scarlet and cobalt Rare colors in the choiciest purples Mauves, sunset yellow and lavender Hastening to create a sweet fantasy I breathe in the crisp, cool air Of an autumn night, a summer light Feeling the freedom of a heart Gentle and warm, feeling forlorn For the tender caress of rainfall Caressing my shoulders lightly I kiss the silence with hope For moments poured full of joy While my heart whispers Recklessly thrilling in the vitality Of a dream that fulfills me I ache for these days of simplicity When light plays with the shadows Echoing through the longings With cries resembling poetry Lingering on the edge of sanity I dream, I imagine, I praise With a prayer of faith Believing in the God who reigns High above my thoughts In a heaven where I will hope Love continues to abide, eternally Inner Child Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke September 1, 2021

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Date: 10/5/2021 1:06:00 PM
A lovely, pretty poem with so many beautiful descriptions and an ethereal feel A childhood that was wonderful. One of my favorite lines above reads, "Emerald forest filled with whispering pines and strong oaks" and the words, "tangerine moon" Sometimes I refer to trees or birds in my poems too. Happy to have found this one Blessings, Marikate
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Date: 10/1/2021 4:15:00 PM
Combinations of words and sounds wonderful
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Date: 9/20/2021 11:14:00 AM
"I ride the vibrant crests of a tangerine moon..." That is especially lovely, I think, but the whole poem is beautiful.
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Date: 9/13/2021 7:47:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me see a part of the child in you, blessed by the Lord. God bless you.
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Date: 9/13/2021 7:29:00 PM
"I kiss the silence with hope For moments poured full of joy" Beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/2/2021 4:05:00 PM
Truly exceptional free verse creation my friend. A definite fav-- a gem... A true treasure to have found and so enjoyed reading! God bless..
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Date: 9/2/2021 4:33:00 AM
You and Buddha would make great friends Gina, lol, My heart with laughing dewdrops, what a line, thank you for flowering my mind this morning, have a precious day dear. xo
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Date: 9/2/2021 3:41:00 AM
I drift on the edge of a smiling Emerald forest filled with Whispery pines and strong oaks…ahh
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Date: 9/1/2021 9:37:00 PM
(long breath, before I exhale, exclaim) Wow!
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Date: 9/1/2021 3:27:00 PM
A beautifully written free verse Gina, such wonderful dreams from the inner child… Belle
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Date: 9/1/2021 2:24:00 PM
Ohhhh Gina! A fave for me. Absolutely lovely. And the pic is great. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/1/2021 1:56:00 PM
Gina, to say this is beautiful is an understatement. I love it! Janice
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Date: 9/1/2021 12:36:00 PM
Magic wrapped in poetry! Superbly written, my dearest friend, Gina! Hugs xxx
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