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My Inner Child

I ride the vibrant crests Of a tangerine moon Glowing across stardust ridges Where inspiration tickles My heart with laughing dewdrops I drift on the edge of a smiling Emerald forest filled with Whispery pines and strong oaks All the trees remind me why The birds make a home on branches With their bristling, dancing leaves I walk through a thriving garden Alive with scarlet and cobalt Rare colors in the choiciest purples Mauves, sunset yellow and lavender Hastening to create a sweet fantasy I breathe in the crisp, cool air Of an autumn night, a summer light Feeling the freedom of a heart Gentle and warm, feeling forlorn For the tender caress of rainfall Caressing my shoulders lightly I kiss the silence with hope For moments poured full of joy While my heart whispers Recklessly thrilling in the vitality Of a dream that fulfills me I ache for these days of simplicity When light plays with the shadows Echoing through the longings With cries resembling poetry Lingering on the edge of sanity I dream, I imagine, I praise With a prayer of faith Believing in the God who reigns High above my thoughts In a heaven where I will hope Love continues to abide, eternally Inner Child Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke September 1, 2021
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Kingston Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 1:06 PM
A lovely, pretty poem with so many beautiful descriptions and an ethereal feel A childhood that was wonderful. One of my favorite lines above reads, "Emerald forest filled with whispering pines and strong oaks" and the words, "tangerine moon" Sometimes I refer to trees or birds in my poems too. Happy to have found this one Blessings, Marikate
Milgate Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 4:15 PM
Combinations of words and sounds wonderful
Peck Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 11:14 AM
"I ride the vibrant crests of a tangerine moon..." That is especially lovely, I think, but the whole poem is beautiful.
Agustin Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 7:47 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me see a part of the child in you, blessed by the Lord. God bless you.
Alex Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 7:29 PM
"I kiss the silence with hope For moments poured full of joy" Beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
Lindley Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 4:05 PM
Truly exceptional free verse creation my friend. A definite fav-- a gem... A true treasure to have found and so enjoyed reading! God bless..
Rose  Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 4:33 AM
You and Buddha would make great friends Gina, lol, My heart with laughing dewdrops, what a line, thank you for flowering my mind this morning, have a precious day dear. xo
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 3:41 AM
I drift on the edge of a smiling Emerald forest filled with Whispery pines and strong oaks…ahh
Seeker Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 9:37 PM
(long breath, before I exhale, exclaim) Wow!
Edmonds  Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 3:27 PM
A beautifully written free verse Gina, such wonderful dreams from the inner child… Belle
Ball Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 2:24 PM
Ohhhh Gina! A fave for me. Absolutely lovely. And the pic is great. God Bless, JB
Canerdy Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 1:56 PM
Gina, to say this is beautiful is an understatement. I love it! Janice
Trifiatis Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Magic wrapped in poetry! Superbly written, my dearest friend, Gina! Hugs xxx
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