Lycia Harding Poet Italian Sonnet

My Immortal Forgiveness

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I made Earth and then let spill
miracles in every spot,
wanting you should want for naught

and when I'd brought light to fill
up the world, I worked until
in my image, you were wrought

Then, by cursed afterthought,
I bestowed you with free will
and with life and death to give,
let you choose how each would go

Now Your death and how you live
are but what your choices show
Still, my Children, I forgive
all because I love you so

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02/27/2017

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Constance La France March 20, 2017 at 3:14 PM Lycia congratulations on your win in my contest ~

CayCay Godwin March 3, 2017 at 8:55 PM Perfect count and rhyme scheme that delivers a message with a bit of wit and wisdom mixed as one. I enjoyed this. All the best ... CayCay Lycia Harding March 7, 2017 at 6:14 AM Thank you, CayCay. Wish me luck in the contest! xoxo