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My Identity

Nattering about the identity Makes me feel guilty About all those years I spent Making everyone happy Lost somewhere, still searching for myself I am somewhere lost in this 9 to 5 job And had no chance left Than to just sob Want to become a Poet, a Singer Trying hard to do what I am Capable Just somewhere knowing the truth and making myself Extraditable Its completely unfair with my eyes As I couldn't make them to stop cry Just because I can't justify Doesn't proof my existence As a consequence of someone who can't just recognise my identity All of their blanish compliment Can't just vanish my identity Instead they lead me to the Town of accomplishments This is how I found myself in the mirror Unhiding the identity and revealing the secrets That I used to keep it Becoming a conspirer

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Date: 7/16/2020 5:37:00 AM
This is how I found myself in the mirror........it's fact of life.......all are well....end of life feels an illusion.......cause there are many things of realistic life lastly feels fake and disillusion truth; greatest mirage on the desert of the past life!......written well; enjoyable
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Simran Malhotra
Date: 7/16/2020 12:38:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/5/2020 8:22:00 AM
Oh I absolutely love your lyric Simran! It reflects my past so much. Stuck in a 9 to 5 job, aspiring to be a poet and a singer, the unending vicious cycle yet clinging to hopes. I could relate to every word. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :) Keep writing and inspiring!
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Simran Malhotra
Date: 7/5/2020 9:50:00 AM
Thank you so much:) This means a lot to me..Hope to keep your feelings same for my upcoming poems too:)
Date: 6/30/2020 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Simran, nice poem!
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Simran Malhotra
Date: 6/30/2020 1:09:00 PM
Thanks

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