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My ice blue eyes gaze at you

My ice blue eyes

Ice blue eyes ~ gaze lovingly at you
Radiating ~ joy to all I see
My motto ~” show kindness to all”
A smile chases all the blues away

Blue butterfly ~ flutters by
Such beauty to behold
I love nature, wildflowers, trees,birds,bees
All radiate God’s love 

Stop what your doing ~ smell the roses
Be thankful to be alive
You are enough my friend
The world a better place because your in it.

Put on your coat or hoodie like me
Let’s go a walk in beauty that surrounds us
Autumn is springing forth
Awesome colours to brighten your day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 12:44 PM
I enjoyed reading your creative "My ice blue eyes gaze at you" write. Great Ending... Hope you are OK... Have a lovely weekend writing away...........
Gibbons Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 2:03 AM
Hi Paula glad you enjoyed my ice blue eyes take thank u for encouragement hugsss 🫂
Rodgers Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 5:19 AM
Dear Dorothy, what a warm, uplifting, and soul-nourishing invite into the crisp autumn air! Your poem radiates a genuine, unforced kindness. In a world that often moves at a frantic pace, to stop what you're doing ~ smell the roses and remember you are enough, my friend. It's the kind of poetry that acts as a balm for the spirit. This morning it’s a ray of sunshine, full of gratitude, warmth, and the comforting promise of a new season. Blessings, Daniel
Gibbons Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 12:33 AM
Hi Daniel thank you for your most inspiring and encouraging comment. ✍️My friends in soup mean so much to me I'm honoured to call you my friend.😍 Your comments always inspire me. Thank you for taking the time to read, 📖listen 🎶and comment on them I cherish your comments my friend. Have a blessed weekend hugs 🫂
Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 2:18 PM
Very pretty and the melody is so catchy. 🌹
Gibbons Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 11:07 PM
Thank you dear Andrea this is new gift from God arranging music with my lyrics I must say I'm so enjoying it as music 🎶 🎵 is my passion hugzzz friend 🫂
Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 2:07 PM
I enjoyed reading this uplifting work by you, Dorothy. Yes, there is so much beauty in God's world for us to enjoy thanking you for reminding us. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Gibbons Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 3:54 PM
Thank u Sara appreciate your encouraging comment hugzzz x🫂🦋xx 🌹
Terry Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 10:06 PM
The song that you added to the poem matches this poem's upbeat nature. Excellent work!
Gibbons Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 11:56 AM
Thank you Angela glad u enjoyed it. I'm loving putting music makes poem come alive ❤️‍🩹🌹
Lane Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 1:50 AM
Well written, blue-eyed Dotti. How I would love to walk with you in Your beautiful Scotland.
Gibbons Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 7:03 AM
Yeah I miss Scotland but Coniston in English lake district is beauty everywhere 😍 I'm blessed by everything around me. Very similar to Scotland Lin.. I love sitting amoung trees 🌳 hugging 🫂 them Tranquility fills my soul , streams meander , Coniston Water is breathtaking. You'll see pic of it with the old steamboat sails up water I took pic from my back garden. It's on my page ere xxx thank u for your inspiring comment 🌹💋
Hind Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 12:38 PM
LOVE this!! ❤️🌹
Gibbons Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 3:45 PM
Thank you paige for your lovely comment 🌹🫂
One Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 2:51 PM
That is a lovely song dear Dorothy.... Your poem is really uplifting and that is so great... we all need eyes gazing at us lovingly, be them blue, green or brown... I love the imagery in your poem... All the best, have a great weekend.
Gibbons Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 10:31 AM
Thank u for reading n commenting enjoy ur weekend too
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 1:33 PM
uplifting and inspirational. enjoyed.
Gibbons Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 2:11 PM
Thank u for encouragement comment Sara appreciate u reading n listening 🎶 💖 music to lyrics brings the poem alive. Happy writingb✍️
Kitchin Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 5:53 AM
Dorothy, this is such a delightful and uplifting poem. A great poem for the challenge. 🌹
Gibbons Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 10:51 AM
Well thank u Sweet tania ❤️‍🩹
Anderson Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 11:13 AM
WOW! Just beautiful. The music is wonderful and perfectly suits the 'mood' and 'ponderings'. Just lovin' it! Cheers! Have Fun!
Gibbons Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 12:33 AM
Thank u zjohn for your inspiring comment om just loving adding songs to lyrics . I never forget who taught me ur da best hugzz 🌠🦋🎶🎵
Edmonds  Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 9:58 AM
That’s lovely Dorothy, poem and the song… Beryl
Gibbons Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 10:52 AM
Thank u sweet Beryl ❤️‍🩹🌹
Empress Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 8:56 AM
My little iceland (kitten) is also listening to the song, haha she is very intrigued! How beautiful is your creation and you are so sweet to write this poem and also what it says! How lucky you have ice blue eyes! I have a thing for blue eyes! They just make me drool! Hahah I am thankful for your kindness and friendship and generous time you spend on lifting so many up! You truly are a gem! Pleasure reading and listenin to your creation! A fave Sending you light always boo hah 👻 🧚 🦄
Gibbons Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 10:59 AM
Hey sweet empress of da ink I'm so glad to hear your drooling over my ice blue eyes looking at you 💙🫂🦋
Gibbons Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 12:34 AM
Thank u my dearest ink your such an encourager and my inspiration too ✍️❤️‍🩹🌙🦄🦄💫🧜‍♀️🧜‍♀️🧜‍♀️🧜‍♀️🧜‍♀️💕glad ur in my life hugzzzz xxx
Sharma  Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 7:33 AM
Ahh love theme of ice blue! It feels refreshing and soothing just the way you intended it to be, sweet Dorothy ~ this world needs kindness and love so much! And I adore the way how you've reflected that through your heartwarming words... Compelling us to leave all the worries and just swoon over the beauty that nature gifts us with! Cherishing every moment! Pleasure reading you always, dear unicorn friend 🦄🦄🧚🏻‍♀️✨🧚🏻‍♀️ keep shining and writing 🩷🩷💖💖💝💝❄️🩵💙
Gibbons Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 10:57 AM
Well thank u dear hiya your love flows in your comments I appreciate your love friend unicorn sparklers from the fairy wand sprinkling da luv ❤️ on you ❤️‍🩹🕊️🌈🦄🫂🦋✨️
Scragg Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 6:47 AM
Another gorgeous song Dorothy 😄😉 relaxation and nature's refreshment put to lovely music 🎶 🎵 ❤️ excellent entry to the theme of the colour blue 💙 🦋🫂
Scragg Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 12:04 PM
You are a musical genius... 🎼 🎶 ✨️ ❤️
Gibbons Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 11:03 AM
Well thank u Sweet loving natasha I so enjoyed doing this challenge guess u can tell... I've now done about 15 songs 🙌❤️‍🩹✍️🎵🎶🎹🎸🥁🎻 Hollywood here I come ready or not for the colourful one of lyrics n music 👀😍😂hugzzz xxx
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