My Humble Prayer

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April -15- 2025

5x5x3 Poetry Contest

Sponsor-Miranda Hawley

Stranded midway, my path is strewn with thistles and thorns. When turbulence rocks my life, I lift my eyes Heavenwards, and beseech- ‘Lord, piolet me’! When tempests toss my vessel, l pray- ‘Hold my hand’. When heartaches leave deep scars, wish, you come with solace, showing an exuberance of kindness. Help me face each day, endowing me with your grace. Lord, fill me with love, to share it with others. This is all I implore.

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 5/2/2025 9:51:00 PM

That is a good prayer and it could possibly be in Psalms! Congratulations on your win in my contest.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 4/27/2025 11:52:00 PM

Back with hearty congratulations, my friend for your top win in this poetry contest with a highly spiritual poem. Love the verses : "Lord, fill me with love, to share it with others. " Sending the blessings of light as usual.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/27/2025 9:48:00 AM

Beautiful thoughts here Valsa. A pleasure, especially "Lord, fill me with love, to share it with others. This is all I implore." Congratulations! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/15/2025 12:07:00 PM

What a wonderful write you have here. I love it... "Good luck" Have a wonderful spring day and a Blessed Easter..........

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/15/2025 7:42:00 AM

magnifique prière, merci poétesse, your english is wonderful, of course