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My Human Folly

We will all die
So we cry loud
And try for thought.

Wrong lane, wrong way.
Death delay, pray.
Cars stray and honk.

Oh, please, cars – clear.
Turns appear soon,
I steer, we cheer.

Copyright © CayCay Jennings | Year Posted 2016

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Sara Kendrick Date: 3/16/2016 6:37:00 AM Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/15/2016 5:45:00 PM CayCay, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/13/2016 7:02:00 PM Hey, I never congratulated you yet. WELL DONE. Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 3/11/2016 1:10:00 PM Very clever and well done, CayCay! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Anindya Mohan Tagore Date: 3/11/2016 12:33:00 PM Lovely take... Hugs, Bobby Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 3/11/2016 11:55:00 AM CayCay, congrats on your placement in the contest!!! Well deserved :)-luloo *Smiles* Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 3/11/2016 11:11:00 AM Scary subject CayCay. Very nicely written. I had a very difficult time with this one. Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/11/2016 7:37:00 AM Hi Cay Cay, you have done really well on a difficult form. Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/17/2016 3:34:00 PM well done, my friend. These are so difficult to make a story from. I was thinking they were six syllables each and now i have to redo my whole set. (sorry I can't see more. I am super behind at Soup) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/14/2016 7:26:00 PM You did great with this very difficult form, Cay Cay. HEY, where have you been. I am waiting for an email from you. happy Valentine day my dear friend. Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 2/14/2016 2:56:00 PM Well done, CayCay. Janice Login to Reply

Emile Pinet Date: 2/14/2016 11:13:00 AM A touching and eloquent description of human folly. Emile Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/14/2016 9:52:00 AM you got my attention all throughout this stunning write, caycay... we do fumble but try to find the way.. how are you?.. missed your presence here!... have a lovely hearts day!..huggs Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 2/14/2016 10:27:00 AM Hey, there. Yepper, we fumble - this one is true, turned into three lanes of traffic coming at me and knew if it was meant to be, it was good bye for my Mother and me. Now, if it is the right time of night, we get serious giggles about the folly. Thank you, Nette ... CayCay

Paul Callus Date: 2/14/2016 9:38:00 AM Hi CayCay! Once somebody said that we spend a lifetime of regret to atone for a moment of folly! Musing aside...I love your take on your human folly. In the meantime I wish you a happy Valentine's Day:) ~ Warm regards // paul Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 2/14/2016 10:24:00 AM What a terribly limiting perspective that prescribes and manifests long lasting regret! Anything from the past that one places in a big sack to carry around, is a waste to me and something I wish I could get my Mother to see. The older she gets, the more bitterness she totes around - some of it made up. Sorry, she and her attitutude weigh heavy on my mind currently. I want her to let go and Let God, and then smile all the way from her heart ...

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/13/2016 9:01:00 PM thank you for supporting my comment. LINDA Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/13/2016 7:18:00 PM I still Believe in Romo. CayCay, I am glad you noticed the logo on my hat... Thanks for the reply. LINDA Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 2/13/2016 8:39:00 PM "Eye of the Tiger" Yo, Romo

Eileen Manassian Date: 2/13/2016 6:55:00 PM Hey gorgeous! Where you been? Missed you around. Hope all is well. Very well written...whatever that form is. ;) Good luck....Loved how you set it up...That inevitable beginning...to the everyday happenings. Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 2/13/2016 7:09:00 PM Hey, gorgeous, too! I've been elsewhere, life sent me there, but all is well and I've missed you, soup, et. al. Never heard or read about this form and did find it a challenge, but that's fun, right? Thank you so much for commenting. Be well ... CayCay

Jan Allison Date: 2/13/2016 6:09:00 PM clever one CayCay I am struggling to even start one of these it seems quite a challenge!:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 2/13/2016 7:07:00 PM I blew off my first 4 forced attempts. Later, I napped and it came to me. Marinate on it and you'll compose, I just know it! I am thrilled that you liked my write. Thank you, Jan ... CayCay

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/13/2016 5:57:00 PM Well done, CayCay ;) Happy Valentines to you..... XOX ~Love LINDA~ Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 2/13/2016 7:13:00 PM Happy heart day to you! I already received and ate huge amounts of chocolate - my favorite food group! Grab love and hold tight. I thank you for commenting, sweet one ... CayCay Oh, your hat says, "Dallas" and appears to be Cowboy colors - maybe next year??? I use to live near their original stadium and use to believe in Romo - now I am deliberating ...