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My House - Life

My House - Life My house- life is constructed with bricks of dignity and self esteem. Enthusiastic emotion has erected columns of uprightness. Perdurable passion has completed pearly painting. Fortune favours through wide window. Destiny forces foisting glass ceiling. Phrenetic frustrations and pococurante stagnancy to escape through back door. Open terrace to savour lustrous lavender love in liberation and dinkum dreamy desires to desseminate. 01/26/23 Brian Strand No. 1175 Contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 10/27/2023 11:44:00 PM
I agree that a touch of alliteration finds its way through your idyllic Free Verse, Anisha! Pococurante was a search for me, and it does emphasize your last phrase. Your written words and win in Brian's contest, were righteous my friend! Aloha, William
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Date: 1/26/2023 5:19:00 PM
Dear Anisha, I adore the lovely threads of alliteration that adorn your vivid verse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest with your exceptional poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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