My Home

The cozy bed, the alarm, a fight to be first in choice The honk, the rush and late for breakfast, moms voice An abode brimming with love, happiness, dreams A place of daily tiffs and of silly screams home is where love exist, where family gleams The familiar nature green and blooming a surrounding, strangers yet loving it is a prodigous family bound by the oneness Treading together no matter how streanous home is where my heart dwell, my country indegenous © Nadiya (26 Jan '15) *Placed 6th in the contest 'home sweet home' on 20th May 2015 by Skat A.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/28/2015 2:51:00 PM

Way to go with this special win..Congrats..Sara

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/26/2015 1:42:00 PM

Hi Posey, I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for your beautiful home sweet home poem! Hugs, Sandra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/23/2015 1:22:00 AM

POESY, Nice win...... LINDA

Skat A

Date: 5/20/2015 7:05:00 PM

Poesy, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN. Enjoyed your Home Sweet Home Entry. Thank you for supporting my contest. ~~SKAT LOVE~~

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/1/2015 5:01:00 PM

beautifully painted as all your piece nadiya

Poesy Relish
Date: 2/1/2015 9:46:00 PM

Thank you Liam for the continued support.

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/29/2015 8:13:00 AM

A lovely picture you painted here Nadiya :) all the best for the contest!!

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/29/2015 9:13:00 AM

Thank you Wilma... appreciate your visit and comment... lov nads!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/28/2015 9:09:00 AM

You have a lovely home.

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/28/2015 9:35:00 AM

Thank you Richard for your continued support...

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/27/2015 2:29:00 PM

Your words are easy to relate to and the story is very familiar to most people when they take a moment to reflect on the comfort and protection of one's home and family. Emile. #7

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/28/2015 5:45:00 AM

Thank you Emile.. appreciate your visit... lov nad!

David Meade

Date: 1/26/2015 4:15:00 PM

Love it -- nothing sweeter or more precious than family love. No breakfast . . . that tough, hopefully you had some coffee or tea!! 7

Poesy Relish
Date: 1/27/2015 2:11:00 AM

thank you David for the visit... appreciate it...' no breakfast' was a mistake... i can see why you got the wrong meaning... thank you for pointing out:)..