Poesy Relish Poet Rhyme

My Home

The cozy bed, the alarm, a fight to be first in choice
The honk, the rush and late for breakfast, moms voice
An abode brimming with love, happiness, dreams
A place of daily tiffs and of silly screams
home is where love exist, where family gleams

The familiar nature green and blooming
a surrounding, strangers yet loving
it is a prodigous family bound by the oneness
Treading together no matter how streanous
home is where my heart dwell, my country indegenous

© Nadiya (26 Jan '15)

*Placed 6th in the contest 'home sweet home' on 20th May 2015 by Skat A.

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Sara Kendrick May 28, 2015 at 2:51 PM Way to go with this special win..Congrats..Sara

Sandra Haight May 26, 2015 at 1:42 PM Hi Posey, I've been away for 10 days, still catching up with PS! Congratulations on your fine win for your beautiful home sweet home poem! Hugs, Sandra

Poet Destroyer A May 23, 2015 at 1:22 AM POESY, Nice win...... LINDA

Skat A May 20, 2015 at 7:05 PM Poesy, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN. Enjoyed your Home Sweet Home Entry. Thank you for supporting my contest. ~~SKAT LOVE~~

Liam Mcdaid February 1, 2015 at 5:01 PM beautifully painted as all your piece nadiya Poesy Relish February 1, 2015 at 9:46 PM Thank you Liam for the continued support.

Wilma Neels January 29, 2015 at 8:13 AM A lovely picture you painted here Nadiya :) all the best for the contest!! Poesy Relish January 29, 2015 at 9:13 AM Thank you Wilma... appreciate your visit and comment... lov nads!

Richard Lamoureux January 28, 2015 at 9:09 AM You have a lovely home. Poesy Relish January 28, 2015 at 9:35 AM Thank you Richard for your continued support...

Emile Pinet January 27, 2015 at 2:29 PM Your words are easy to relate to and the story is very familiar to most people when they take a moment to reflect on the comfort and protection of one's home and family. Emile. #7 Poesy Relish January 28, 2015 at 5:45 AM Thank you Emile.. appreciate your visit... lov nad!

David Meade January 26, 2015 at 4:15 PM Love it -- nothing sweeter or more precious than family love. No breakfast . . . that tough, hopefully you had some coffee or tea!! 7 Poesy Relish January 27, 2015 at 2:11 AM thank you David for the visit... appreciate it...' no breakfast' was a mistake... i can see why you got the wrong meaning... thank you for pointing out:)..

M. L. Kiser January 26, 2015 at 3:23 PM A wonderful, homey pen. Poesy Relish January 27, 2015 at 2:08 AM Thank you again Kiser... appreciate your taking time to read my poems.

Paul Callus January 26, 2015 at 2:39 PM Arthur and Rajat beat me to it...home sweet home! Nothing beats a united family where love abounds, despite all the ups and downs. #7 hugs // paul Poesy Relish January 26, 2015 at 2:50 PM Well said paul thank you for the visit... your comments are always a pleasure to read.. lov,nad!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2015 at 1:17 PM - Enjoy reading Nadiya, a safe and good home .... lovely :) - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Poesy Relish January 26, 2015 at 1:54 PM Thank you Anne-Lise for your continued support.lov n hugs, nad!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 26, 2015 at 12:23 PM Home Sweet Home Nad, East or West my home is best. Great write > love>rajat Poesy Relish January 26, 2015 at 1:53 PM Thank you Rajat...love ,nad!

Charmaine Chircop January 26, 2015 at 9:05 AM Home is where the heart is..So true..So wonderful your words!Charma Poesy Relish January 26, 2015 at 9:10 AM Thank you Charma... for your your comment and visit. Nad

Arthur Vaso January 26, 2015 at 8:33 AM Home sweet home indeed, beautiful poem! Poesy Relish January 26, 2015 at 9:11 AM Thank you Arthur for taking time to read my poem. Lov nad!

Constance La France January 26, 2015 at 8:00 AM Nadiya, a delightful and well written poem of home, so full of love and life, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~ Poesy Relish January 26, 2015 at 9:12 AM Thank you for your encouraging words and best wishes.