My Home

My home's not made of brick or even frame or wood She's been known to move around from locations bad to good She required no down payment I never got a mortgage statement Yet for comfort and for loveliness She tops, by far, all other nests For my home is where your heart does beat ~ My Paradise on Earth ~ so sweet

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/23/2020 5:38:00 PM

This is seriously perfect my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/24/2020 5:52:00 PM

Gee, And I thought I had penned it in a light-hearted, jovial mood. ~ Cirius

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/23/2020 12:54:00 PM

If only we could all do away with costly payments and make our nets in trees! Love this poem, Gershon, and the last two lines made me smile. Thanks for the lift. Hugs, Carolyn

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/23/2020 11:10:00 AM

Absolutely!! If one has found true love, then he or she has already obtained the greatest treasure. Love it!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/23/2020 1:02:00 PM

Thank you so much for your enthusiasm about "My Home." I really, really appreciate your support, Joe! Best always, Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/23/2020 10:41:00 AM

Hello Gershon Wolf, I have heard Home is where the heart is" I believe that is true. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/23/2020 3:12:00 PM

Hello Gershon, yes Home is where the heart is. You are so welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/23/2020 10:50:00 AM

You have touched on the essence, Darlene, and the message of the poem. Thank you so much, my friend! :) gw