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My Home

Home, Well it's not the bricks and mortar For that is just the house. It's... ...coming into the driveway, ...parking next to your works van, Knowing I'll soon be there. My excitement flutters, Like butterfly wings beating against my heart. As I come through the door Your voice fills my ears, Warm and comforting, Embracing my soul with your, "Hi honeybee how was your day?" Your arms fold around me As you drop light kisses on my neck, I relax into your body and... ...the butterfly stills, For when I'm with you, At last, I'm home. 16th August 2019

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Ann Gilmour

Date: 8/21/2019 1:20:00 PM

Ohhh Elizabeth I love this poem, it illustrates your true love and after many years of wedded bliss you are lucky to have found the love of your life and soulmate. Congrats on your 2nd place win with this glorious love story... may you continue making precious memories. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 8/21/2019 1:46:00 PM

Thanks Ann and congratulations on your 2nd place win also. I'm so grateful that I have Bryan in my life especially after his health scares. I thank the angels for looking after him.

Ann Foster

Date: 8/21/2019 8:28:00 AM

Home. So often we do realize how important going there can be. We are in such a hurry for the next thing, as not to linger and enjoy what we have. How sweet, how romantic your write. Truly...love at its finest. Ann

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 8/21/2019 9:19:00 AM

Thank you Ann for your comment.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/20/2019 7:18:00 PM

Hello Elizabeth … yes, a house is not necessarily a home, so what you have written explains it all - well done again - Lindsay

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 8/21/2019 1:09:00 AM

Thank you Lindsay.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/20/2019 1:00:00 PM

I just adore the beautiful imagery in this lovely entry Elizabeth. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving win! : ) xxoo

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 8/20/2019 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Connie for your kind words.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/20/2019 10:25:00 AM

so true, that is just a house. A home is different- Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement. I was honored to read your poem :)-luloo

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 8/20/2019 2:09:00 PM

Thank you so much on my placement. I've just started to write again, as a broken wrist is giving me more time. I'm very lucky to have a husband who is my home.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/16/2019 3:36:00 PM

Such a light, 'feels right' touch, Elizabeth. Really let me feel how you are 'right at home.' ~ Fellow butterfly

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 8/16/2019 3:59:00 PM

Thank you Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2019 12:46:00 PM

absolutely adorable Elizabeth so sweet and romantic!:-) hugs jan xx

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 8/16/2019 12:55:00 PM

Thank you Jan. I'm so lucky to have a wonderful husband that after 32yrs still gives me butterflies.