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My History of Me, One Day

We awakened, we argued, just like we had done before It was mostly about football, the Celtic versus Rangers score I would choose my team, as usual he would choose his Pushing and shoving would then entail, growing brotherly bliss But this was a day that was going to unite us, brothers, yes we For we were getting our uniforms, the Boys Brigade's 4th Company Football squabbles we left behind, to Bishop Edens we would go It's our Primary School, did I tell you, our learning's in scholar show As usual we met at playtime, in the same team we always played We were like Pele, no doubt, well! it's what we tried to display To the clock we always watched, as we told each other after school Lets hurry home to have supper, for the 4th Company in us ruled We left the caravan together, then brotherly competition arrived Hey James! I'll race you to the canal, my little legs in strive Into the distance he ran, blimey! he's much faster than I thought I must continue to look up to him, he's my elder, I'm sure well taught Just as I turned the corner, now knowing that I'm lagging behind One minute he was there then gone, images now run through my mind What I have witnessed, is now focused, a JU250 van has swept him away It's impact I feel in my heart, I'm now in slow motion play I now reach the junction, in my peripheral I hear my brother scream Nothing like this I have heard, am I absorbed in a nightmare dream The driver exits the van, his head he holds in his hands I'm seven years old in tears, just trying to understand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/12/2011 10:03:00 PM
my goodness. This sounds horrible what happened, James. it was true?? Did you lose your brother? A poem with an emotional punch. congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/12/2011 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Frank's "A History Of One Day" contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/10/2011 11:25:00 PM
This is such a graphic account of a dreadful day..I am glad u placed in this contest...Written from a heart in anguish, you communicate so well this emotion to the audience. Congrats, James. Happy holly-days too.
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Date: 12/10/2011 10:38:00 AM
JAMES, congratulations in FRANK'S contest, have a wonderful day,..p.s.
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Date: 12/10/2011 9:06:00 AM
A touching write James.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/10/2011 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a day this is tragic and written so well x
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Date: 11/20/2011 4:19:00 PM
Sometimes I am at a loss for words....sometimes....this is one of those times...WOW! What a story...u have the audience in between heart beats and breaths...written so well, James. Gwendolen
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Date: 11/20/2011 8:22:00 AM
How tragic, a very sad story well told James
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Date: 11/19/2011 11:59:00 AM
James-I am very impressed-you told this sad story so well-really had me engaged-much luck to you in the contest.
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Date: 11/18/2011 5:14:00 PM
man this is a heartbreaking tragic story. Must have been awfukl to witness such a thingYou told the story well in poetic terms James!
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Date: 11/18/2011 2:16:00 PM
James your poetry is filled with a quiet honesty...glad I stopped by and hope all is well...luv shannon
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James Fraser
Date: 11/18/2011 2:23:00 PM
What you read Shannon, happened on the 19th of February 1969. I so love to write stories in poetry, this one is one I witnessed at 7 years old.....

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