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My Hero 

Ever since I was a child he tore a piece of sun and stitched me whole 
working himself to the bone so I could have a bed and home  
he never complained and he always made it back ,even during storms 

He was my Father, My Hero, my best friend ... When I was overwhelmed submerged in ether listening to bells go off in a not so distant medical bed he walked in to pick me up, gave me a giant doll then scooped me in his big strong arms and took me home. When I was left behind for reasons I could not comprehend mistaken for crazy and sent to a medical facility, he spoke to the doctors then gently brought me back to health. When he was dying from cancer and I could not sleep I drove hours to get to him, Stopped a a nearby village, and found a perfect blue rose When I placed it by his bedside, holding my hand he said to me "Daughter, its time for me to go home. " I wasn't ready but I released him and let him go, how I found the strength, I will never know. Until this day when I think of heroes I think of my dad those starlit eyes, that golden smile, those strong arms. Today, inside this broken heart of mine there lives a hero, one that I could never replace, nor misplace. My dad. July 27, 2022

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Date: 8/18/2022 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful tribute for your dad, yet a sad write. Have a great/blessed day..............................
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Date: 7/28/2022 2:53:00 PM
Lovely tribute and so genuine and heartfelt. I love that you loved so much, so beautifully. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/28/2022 5:22:00 AM
Heartfelt tribute, Vienna. Love exudes throughout dwelling in memories. Best to you my friend.
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Date: 7/28/2022 2:13:00 AM
A great hero, a tribute to a man who was faultless. A poem to admire. Hugs.
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Date: 7/27/2022 9:20:00 PM
I thought of my dad too Vie and this one brought tear in my eyes. A favorite and your dad was a wonderful man you were very fortunate to have a dad like him. God bless him, for who he was and what he was to you a Hero...
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Date: 7/27/2022 4:51:00 PM
Hi Vienna, this is an excellent write. I can understand how this man is your Hero. He is with you through your formative years, the voice of wisdom in your mind. He is ever with you, no matter how old you may be. I know you can feel your Hero with you. Your words paint such a beautiful picture, even his passing found its way into my heart. Has to be a fave. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX. Has to be a fave.
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