Notes About The Poem

My Heart Weeps

Please stay,
my love, don’t leave
Today.

I sigh
my heart weeps, I
can't lie


Bye Trace,
let's share our last
embrace.








Photo # 1
Contest: Finding Your Musette 2
Sponsor: Joseph May
03/31/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
April 26, 2021 at 12:42 PM
Great musette, Alexis! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Sweet! Congratulations, Alexis!
Hankins Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 12:39 PM
Good job, Alexis. I just "snuck" through.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Very sad to say goodbye to the one you love. Have a blessed day...............
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 3:48 PM
Fantastic Alexis! You have created a wonderful musette! Congratulations on your win! Blessings xxoo
May Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:55 AM
Beautiful write Alexis, Congrats on your win..
Y. Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 9:09 AM
Hi Joseph, You hosted a good contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a great day and weekend:-)Alexis
Evans Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 8:53 AM
Ooh! So, loveydovey touching. Congrats, Alexis. Have a great day.
Andresen Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 1:07 PM
- Lovely written, Alexis :) - Always sad to say goodbye - Best wishes in the contest :) - I have not been on "soup" the last week ... Easter holiday without soup :)))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 8:21 AM
such a touching piece Alexis, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Kinard Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 4:14 AM
Wow! this is sad piece of work we all have to say goodbye in our life. nicely done.
Faulkner Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 2:11 PM
You have showed the sadness of farewell so skillfully (guess we both have good taste!) Happy Easter to you as well~
Y. Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 2:22 PM
Hi Michelle, Thank you so much. ( lol! I agree we have good taste.) I appreciate that you stopped by to visit me today:-) Alexis
Ball Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 6:11 PM
A very poignant piece my friend. The angst of two lovers separating but there is the feeling that it is only temporary and he will soon return. Well done. God Bless, JB
Proxenos Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 12:59 PM
Oh this is sad but soooooo touching and sentimental - your poetry is so real to life and that is why I love to read it and look forward to each poem you post. Blessings my friend from across the pond, Jenniifer.
Mcintosh Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 4:11 AM
so gorgeous. Love it. God bless you with love, Gina
Trifiatis Avatar
April 1, 2021 at 3:51 AM
So tender and so touching! I hope your verses come true, my dearest friend, Alexis! Hugs xxx
Pettit Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 2:25 PM
I'm leaving on a jet plane. I don't know when I'll be back again. Your good write reminded me of that music classic.
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