My Heart Sings

You caused my lonely heart to sing
  Oh such happiness that you bring
 I knew instantly I wasn't a play thing
You said you wanted more than a fling
  Now I'm smiling as I wear your ring














Inspired By The Five Line Contest 


10-4-16
Alexis Y
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 3:04 PM
Very romantic poem, Alexis. You got my heart singing w/this one. Well done, lady. Love always.
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 8:54 AM
a GREAT five lines in monorhyme, Alexis. I enjoyed this.
B. Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 12:20 AM
"Now I'm smiling as I wear your ring" Brought a smile to my face as I know that feeling and the joy it brings :) Great poem :)
Davis Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Hey Alexis, I sent you some poetry soup mail If you care :D
Y. Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Hi Ali, I just replied to your soup mail. I will visit you soon:-) Alexis
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November 5, 2016 at 7:14 AM
Smiling @ happy endings. :) Goo luck Alexis!
Pan Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 5:52 AM
Nothing could stop you from being happy! Go ahead Alexis!
Godwin Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 10:50 PM
And I'm smiling as I read this sweet write! So simple and again - so sweet. Best of luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay
Vaso Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 10:06 PM
So Sweet!!! :)
Jackson Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 9:40 PM
Beautiful
Wolf Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 9:33 PM
And you made it look so easy! Well done Alexis and good luck
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