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My Heart Says Sorry

My heart, this morning, says sorry to you, 
It apologized for what it had done,
It apologized for all the pain it had caused, 
It apologized to everyone,

For falling in love with her beautiful dress, 
For loving the shape of her curve,
For falling in love with the dance that she did, 
For falling in love with hors d’oeuvres,

The caramelized onions, pizza wheel, chicken waffle, 
And lentil meatballs on a stick,
And eating all the strawberry buttermilk donuts, 
And eating until you were sick,

My heart, this morning, says sorry to you, 
My beautiful stomach and gut,
Especially sorry for those chillies I ate, 
And sorry to my tender butt.


Written 5th February 2018, entered into luloos contest "best poem in February" . this has never been entered into any contest :)

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Kim Rodrigues February 6, 2018 at 12:10 PM Love this, Lewis! Well done! Lewis Raynes February 6, 2018 at 3:53 PM cheers Kim, thanks

Line Gauthier February 5, 2018 at 6:10 PM Awesome poem, terrific spin midway. Surprising how far the words I'M SORRY will take us. Awesome job, Lewis. Lewis Raynes February 5, 2018 at 6:20 PM Thanks Line, I'm glad u enjoyed this one. Cheers :)

Jan Allison February 5, 2018 at 4:59 PM Love the humour here Lewis I was feeling hungry until I got to the final stanza lol:-) hugs Jan Lewis Raynes February 5, 2018 at 5:08 PM hahaha, thanks Jan