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My Heart Lies With You

As our new life begins; With you at my side, My Spirit is glad. My soul satisfied. Each day brings about, A depth of love I've not yet known; It's pure, It's fresh, And it tickles my soul. Eternity is long, but not long enough; to be with my love, and show you how much; I Love you. As time goes on it's more apparent that, My Life would be nothing without you. You my happiness; You my Joy; You my Love; And You my Life. When Our lives are through; My heart will rejoice as it lies with You.
written in 1997

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/22/2015 3:35:00 AM
- Hello Danielle :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/18/2015 4:32:00 PM
this is a wonderful free verse poem, Danielle, sweet all over. Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:10:00 PM
Danielle, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Danielle Fenske
Date: 10/18/2015 8:45:00 AM
Thank you. I was curious, if you have any suggestions on what type of poems I've written. I just guessed. Most of my poems, I never kept a copy of...I wrote them as gifts and gave them away.
Date: 10/17/2015 1:21:00 PM
how sweet to see....that your heart lies with me....and that's how it should be....for all Eternity.....I Love this Danielle....;)
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Danielle Fenske
Date: 10/18/2015 8:42:00 AM
;) Thank you. I wrote this way beck in 97! As a gift for my husband on our wedding day. For our 18th Anniversary I gave him "All of me Loves all of You"
Date: 10/17/2015 1:14:00 PM
Very beautiful Danielle. I can feel your happiness.
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