Notes About The Poem

Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I'll meet you there. Rumi

 

 

My Heart is a Secret Garden

This fortress is overgrown with moss,
guarded from storms of selfishness,
when the waltz with winter left behind 
a mausoleum covered in frozen dahlia dust.

Fading with scents of summer Jasmine,
peaches rot in a forgotten orchard,
where ivy strangles statues of past lovers,
whose infatuation drifted with nemesis clouds.

But, beyond the barricade
with every butterfly beat,
there is a sigh craving for comfort from
lips that will surrender this solitude.

My soul searches for Rumi's field of fairness,
where 'forever' is not just a gesture and
honesty is not hidden behind metaphors.
Yet, I wonder if love is a beautiful phenomenon
that will endlessly evade my grasp.

In this giddiness, I ponder
why romance is an abused cliché,
so should I gift my garden to another,
when petals I plant only perish?
Maybe, I am not worthy,
maybe, I seek for it in starry eyed fantasies,
where all bonds are evergreen -
but in reality most are moulded artificially

Confined inside the sanctuary of this heart,
behind a stubborn shield,
there is a love story where roses flourish,
alongside honeysuckle, untouched.

Knock to enter if you desire to cultivate,
not conquer through self-centred crusades. 
Compose a chorus of internal birdsongs, 
to revive extinct flowers. blossoming in my 
oasis of kisses, only seen in your dreams.

A simple Sunday Musing.  An example for the contest I am currently running.

17 May 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2026 at 11:14 PM
I see this one had POTD. Belated congrats on that, S O. I remember I really liked this one
Proxenos Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 12:10 PM
Congratulations my friend, I indeed enjoyed this poem. True love is not often found often but your wonderful oasis you have grown and your love that grows within the petals and roses and a great many more beautiful flowers and which you compare to your yearning for a heart that finds an everlasting love ,which at present is overgrown with moss. I hope you find your true love, maybe you even know her yet still have to join the dots. My husband and I found this love when in our early twenties yet it took many years to recognize this. He is my sun every morning as it rises, and my romantic love when the moon comes out. Loved this poem SO, and congrats on your POTD. Hugs Jennifer
Crandall Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 6:15 PM
Silent, belated POTD congratulations! Got me thinking about a world of secret gardens.
Messina Avatar
May 28, 2026 at 11:39 AM
Hey SO, I thought I commented on this but looking thru perhaps I never validated it. Anyway, belated Congrats on POTD with this heartfelt poem. We never know what tomorrow brings. Hopefully happiness to you, my friend. Great to see you and thanks for your recent visit. Stay well...
La France Avatar
May 27, 2026 at 8:52 PM
Silent, beautifully penned and congratulations on receiving the Poem Of The Day honor ~
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 10:17 PM
I see this got POTD. That is not surprising. Big congrats , S.O.
Winter Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 4:00 AM
Dear S O, a beautiful poem so worthy of POTD! My heart is a secret garden is such a beautiful title. Congratulations on POTD! Best, Anne
Singh Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 12:57 AM
One's emotion need be protected while yearning for meaningful love and growth.I like your poem.Congratulations on your POTD.
Kauffman Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 1:03 PM
SO, congratulations on your POTD with this romantic tour of your heart - an oasis, a place where the foliage of love thrives amidst questions. I so love your poems that inspire. Blessings to my my friend!
One Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 1:33 PM
An oasis only blossoms beautiful petals and that is how it should flourish... it is a big compliment that this poem inspired you.. Thank you for your wishes.
Hind Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 10:51 PM
congrats on POTD :)
One Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 10:07 AM
Thank you
Nicole Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 9:13 PM
With a heart open, softness and a gentle melody can create those flutter-by feelings deep inside. Such a beautiful moment, indeed. Always be careful, because not all with wounded wings that need comfort in the corner of your garden; are there for the right reason. You are worthy of so much love, Silent One. Congratulations my dear sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Always. Hugs, Brandy
One Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 12:16 PM
My sweet poetess, always an honour when you grace my page..i think everyone deserves comfort..even those who cannot comfort others...we just have to shield our hearts...we are all worthy of love..thank you or your compassion and support...sending you blessings :)
One Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 10:09 AM
My sweet poetess, always an honour when you grace my page..i think everyone deserves comfort..even those who cannot comfort others...we just have to shield our hearts...we are all worthy of love..thank you or your compassion and support...sending you blessings :)
Parker Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 7:28 PM
Kahlil Gibran wrote " love cannot be directed by human will, for love if it finds you worthy will direct your course"
One Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 12:17 PM
Wise words my friend...Thank you
Parker Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 6:37 PM
POTD 2 b sure, S1. Love this line: but in reality most are moulded artificially...double images rise. Worthy indeed. :o))
One Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 12:17 PM
True words Arlo...Thank you
Beaufort Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 2:15 PM
Silent One, your expectations sound very reasonable to me. Perhaps there is someone you will encounter who will love you and respect your freedom of sprit at the same time. This doesn't happen easily or that often, but it does happen. Wishing you the best and sending smiles!!
One Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 12:18 PM
Sometimes it is better to be alone my friend..appreciate your visit thank you
Buehler Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 1:09 PM
I am back with delighted congratulations on POTD, Silent One. Kudos!
One Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 1:35 PM
Thank you Evelyn
Anaya Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:07 AM
Back to wish you congratulations on POTD! Image Mastery
One Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:25 AM
Thank you once again...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 10:29 AM
Back with Congrats for POTD!
One Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:25 AM
Thank you for your return visit my friend... Blessings.
Rodgers Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 10:03 AM
Dear Silent One, This morning, I am opening the gate to your garden, which feels familiar to my soul, even as the world hasn’t yet decided whether to plow under or bless. I let my feet feel the moss, the ruined orchards, the stubborn roses still holding their own. Oh, the poetic wanting a world that beautifies itself with truth, not counterfeit culture. Yet beneath every doubt, there’s a passion and purpose to not die but push onward to seek peace. The wild mercy is the key. Blessings, Daniel
One Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:24 AM
Your comment is so poetic... your words are always so poetic... Appreciate your analysis of the poem and your comment... we have to keep away from those counterfeit cultures.... Thank you
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 10:02 AM
Hello Silent One :-) Congratulations on your very nice POTD! Have a nice day ~ AA
One Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:22 AM
Thank you Abdullah..
Roper Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 7:52 AM
Great metaphors for this heart of yours, brimming with vivid imagery and emotion. Congratulations on POTD, my friend—well deserved.
One Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:22 AM
Thank you my dear friend... I hope all is well with you..
Goldsmith Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 7:48 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I loved reading your amazing "My Heart is a Secret Garden" write again. Have a blessed day/week with your wonderful win as you write away...................
One Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:22 AM
Thank you my friend... Appreciate your wishes.. Have a lovely day and week ahead..
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 7:15 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, your pondering of love and questioning of whether it is worth the risk is human and beautiful SO, may you find the perfect one who will flourish in your garden one day. Congratulations my friend :)
One Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:17 AM
Thank you BJ, I hope I find the right one also, but I ma i no rush... I am content in knowing what was not meant for me was for a reason and I trust fate.... Hope you are well and your sister is having all the support she requires.. sending peace and blessings..
Kendrick Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 5:01 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Way to go. Sara K.
One Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:15 AM
Thank you Sara..
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 4:57 AM
thanks for sharing your 'musings' and congrats on your POTD designation
One Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:15 AM
Thank you Sara...
Kitchin Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 3:37 AM
SO, wonderfully penned. Love can be a beautiful thing when it flourishes with the right person. Congratulations on POTD.
One Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 11:14 AM
You are so right Tania, but it can be difficult to find the right person.... Appreciate your visit.. Thank you
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