My Heart For You

(07/11/2011)

This is my heart for you to keep
Sprinkle it with your love after your each sleep
When it's bigger, give back to me
Instead of you, I am the one 
Who'll ask the whole you when I'm on my knee

*Yeah I wish I had that kind of courage to propose a man... :))

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/14/2011 10:10:00 AM
Wishing you glad tiding for the upcoming Holiday Season Dinda. It is the time of year to reach out to old friends and new friends as well. As the old year ends and the New Year arrives I wish blessings to you and yours always. May you be blessed with inspiration and see your writing endeavors cascade upward in 2012. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2011 10:45:00 AM
* "I Love Love * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Dinda * I Can Somehow Sense That It Shan't Not Be Your Beauty Upon Ones Knee Rather * They, Gazing Into Your Beautiful Endless Eyes * 'Please, Baby, Would You Be Mine' * Rapture Amid The Neverending * My Luv, Beyound The Ends of Endless Time * Sarah." *
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Date: 11/12/2011 12:41:00 PM
Let HIM do the proposing, sweetie! and don't ever act desperate! But it's great for you to feel THIS much in love.
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Date: 11/11/2011 7:09:00 AM
I love a women who can take charge, but the old fashion way is still the the way... Sweep a women off her feet !!!! and put her on a pedistal....love your words here hun....love Michael
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Date: 11/9/2011 9:41:00 PM
Best ya don do it in a hurrie dear. Easy to do, it's the repenting that takes so long! :)
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Date: 11/8/2011 12:06:00 PM
That is so sweet Dinda! You have the courage...You just need to find it and use it... :-)
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Date: 11/8/2011 10:14:00 AM
Lovely romantic write, Dinda. Well, I told myself over and over that I wanted to get out of bed this morning, that I wanted to go to work, that I loved being up the morning...I told myself...and I told myself...Perhaps I'll believe it eventually, LOL
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