Fin Chuuk Poet Free verse

My Heart Cries

There used to be that “I can’t breathe without you kind of love”.
Where I’m your everything happiness 
And you’re my absolute of everything in life. 
But it has gone.
     Gone
         Gone
             Gone
Now it’s just - 
Because it needs to be…

What happened to us?
What went wrong to our deep true love?
It feels like it faded into a portal.
And land far far away.
Out.
Of.
Reach.

So we’re just here stuck.
In flesh, untouched.
Because that’s us now.

But you don’t know how my heart cries- 
I want so much to love you, like the first time I ever felt my heart was so full of only you. 
I want so much that your heart is incapable of unloving me.
I want so much to rewind back time to our firsts of happily moments and pause it there until it stretches it to our forever future.

I want so much for you to say, 
I love you it hurts to live without you!
And I say
I
   love 
         you
               for
                   life!
Then you smile 
I smile 
We live happily ever after.

The 
      end.


Fin Chuuk

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Speaks Volumes July 20, 2023 at 1:17 AM Such a wonderful poem Fin. I miss you

Paige Hind March 15, 2023 at 10:36 AM Lovely romantic poem! Fin Chuuk March 15, 2023 at 6:47 PM Paige, thank you so much. :)

Lisa Ricci March 14, 2023 at 1:50 PM Dear Fin. Welcome once again to PoetrySoup. I am a free verse girl and always will be. Yes, you do it proud and with perfection. I am impressed. You truly are a skilled writer. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us. Have a wonderful night. Take care. (smile) PS - the emotive factor is ever present. Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 8:31 PM Lisa, how my heart smile with this most beautiful comment you gifted me. I am so happy you enjoyed my first post here. Thank you kindly and I look forward to reading more your fabulous poems. :) ~ Fin

William P. Harris Sr. March 9, 2023 at 11:23 AM Beautiful. Thank you Fin Chuuk March 9, 2023 at 2:45 PM Thank you, Harris :)

Marikate Kingston February 22, 2023 at 4:19 PM Your last three lines are my favorite. " Then you smile.... They would make a lovely verse in a Hallmark card. So meaningful, so pretty. Fin Chuuk February 22, 2023 at 7:57 PM Awe, thank you so much, Marikate :)

Beryl Edmonds February 19, 2023 at 1:14 AM Marvellous poetry Fin, true love never dies, it stays a flame in the heart till our ending arrives. Welcome to PoetrySoup and enjoy your poetic journey… Belle Fin Chuuk February 22, 2023 at 7:58 PM Thank you, Belle :)

Caren Krutsinger February 18, 2023 at 8:16 AM There is nothing as powerful as falling in and out of love. Your feelings on a page makes a great poem every single time. Bravo! Fin Chuuk February 22, 2023 at 7:58 PM Thank you, Caren :)

Joanna Daniel February 16, 2023 at 6:30 PM May your heart's wish come true, Fin! Welcome to Poetry soup:) Fin Chuuk February 22, 2023 at 7:58 PM Thank you, Jo :)

Mystic Rose Rose February 16, 2023 at 12:42 AM There is dee passion in your words, also a sensitivity that touches the soul. Battle cry of love I call it, I enjoyed your poem Fin Chuuk February 22, 2023 at 7:59 PM You’re so sweet, Mystic :)

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2023 at 5:39 PM finally seeing your first post. wow. to ever have a love like this at all at least you know the feeling. this part was my favorite - I want so much that your heart is incapable of unloving me. Fin Chuuk February 22, 2023 at 7:59 PM Thank you so much, Andrea, very sweet of you :)

Vijay Pandit February 15, 2023 at 8:34 AM Highly emotive write, Fin. Love exudes throughout whether then or now. Time changes us ---I like the inspiring thoughts in ending lines.

Joseph May February 11, 2023 at 8:31 AM I like the happy ending to this write Fin, Very nicely penned Fin Chuuk February 11, 2023 at 4:29 PM Awe, thank you so much, Joseph! :)

Sara Kendrick February 7, 2023 at 3:52 AM Welcome to soup and thank you for sharing your heart felt work. A love that sticks for life does tend to wane unless a couple goes to a little extra effort to keep it alive. Go the extra mile with a date night doing something she loves. Sara Fin Chuuk February 7, 2023 at 8:21 PM Awe, I’m smiling reading your sweet comment, Sara. Thank you so much :). ~ Fin

Edward Ibeh February 6, 2023 at 7:41 PM Gorgeous debut poem, Fin:-) Welcome to Poetrysoup, my friend. Fin Chuuk February 6, 2023 at 8:52 PM Thank you so much , Edward, for the lovely comment and welcoming. I appreciate it very much. ~ Fin

Susan Ashley February 5, 2023 at 9:53 AM Dear Fin, the turmoil of forlorn emotions fill your potent yet tender poem. When love slips through our grasp and feels lost to us we experience the most passionate pain as your poem so eloquently captures. The longing and heartache are palpable. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Fin Chuuk February 5, 2023 at 11:30 AM Hi, Susan, what a pleasure to read to your lovely comment. Thank you so much. Made me smile :)

Charles Messina February 2, 2023 at 6:13 PM Nicely written, Fin. You are breaking our hearts with your very first poem (lol). A great descriptive love loss write.. Welcome to the Soup! Also, thank you for commenting on my POTD poem I really appreciate you :) Keep 'em coming, my friend :) Charlie Fin Chuuk February 3, 2023 at 4:12 PM I don’t want broken hearts anymore. Lol! Thank you, Charles. :)

Panagiota Romios February 1, 2023 at 9:14 PM WelcomeFin..i say love for you, is just around the corner I wrote a poem about this same subject a few days ago. Don’t count on one man to stay with you. You choose the next time, you be the one in control. Then..you will not end up being beind victimized Do not think any man is there forever Panagiot. Take Control Fin Chuuk February 3, 2023 at 4:10 PM Thank you so much, Panagiota. I appreciate you :)

Victor Buhagiar January 31, 2023 at 10:30 PM Love loss is always a subject that attracts. You wrote a marvellous poem. I like your format too. Fin Chuuk February 3, 2023 at 4:09 PM Thank you kindly, Vic.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2023 at 11:11 AM - A lovely poem with feelings, Fin - Welcome to our Poetry community... enjoy :) - Fin Chuuk January 31, 2023 at 1:03 PM Thank you for the lovely comment and welcome :)

Mark Frank January 31, 2023 at 9:52 AM Well done...the value of your words reveal the power of love. Great Stuff. Fin Chuuk January 31, 2023 at 1:02 PM Thank you, Mark

John Lawless January 29, 2023 at 8:18 PM would that we all found such a storybook ending.....or beginning.....nicely done and welcome to "soup" Fin Chuuk January 29, 2023 at 8:27 PM It would make life too easy and beautiful. Lol. Thank you so much, John.

Brandy Nicole January 29, 2023 at 7:53 PM This statement touches my heart deeply: "So we’re just here stuck in flesh, untouched." I can feel your heart and the emotions within. The longing. This almost reads like a song. Welcome to Poetry Soup. My best to you. ~ Brandy Fin Chuuk January 29, 2023 at 8:26 PM Hello, Brandy, your beautiful comment makes me smile. Thank you very much.