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My Heart Aches For You

how my heart aches for you you who do not see the dainty charm of words and their sweet efficacy how my heart aches for you you who remain unmoved by the nuances and hues of rhymes my heart's approved how my heart aches for you you who do not fawn over works of Langston Hughes and the likes of great John Donne How my heart aches for you you who do not feel the soothing sentiment of poems that can heal How may heart aches for you it aches, it aches, it aches for you cannot bear your soul to poetic gust that shakes how my heart aches for you for you will never know the passion that sears my soul then bathes me in its glow ~~ ~~ ~ * ~ ~~ My ~~ ~ heart ~ ~ aches ~ ~ for ~ U Eileen Manassian “If of thy mortal goods thou art bereft, And from thy slender store two loaves alone to thee are left, Sell one, and with the dole Buy hyacinths to feed thy soul.” ?Saadi (A Persian POET) My hyacinths are shaped liked poems!

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Alexis Y.

Date: 4/17/2017 11:11:00 AM

WoW! Eileen, This is so well written. I love Langston Hughes. Poetry "saved" me in a way. It continues to do wonders to me. It's so therapeutic. I really appreciate your gift. A without doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/16/2017 8:41:00 AM

The quote at the end is one of my favorite ones..I enjoyed your work..Some people don't get poetry and that is okay for we can't all be alike..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/15/2017 10:15:00 AM

I loved the refrain and the final shape, Eileen:) great write:)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/12/2017 3:53:00 PM

Hello Eileen. This was written with power and expression. You obviously have skill with that. Honestly. The expression and emphasis are more than fine. Well done

Maria Williams

Date: 4/11/2017 10:24:00 PM

You are truly a creative writer Eileen, I really enjoyed this and the heart shape at the bottom, the icing on the cake. A 7+

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/8/2017 9:18:00 AM

I can't imagine how bland life would be if it weren't coloured with words. Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/9/2017 2:58:00 AM

I can't either, Richard. It boggles my mind. How can people just....live...without the wonder of words. Hugs

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/7/2017 8:58:00 PM

I have come to know that without art and words life has no meaning, it is those things that saturate the soul. My heart aches as well for those who just don't feel the awesomeness of it. Loved your write . hugs x

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/9/2017 3:13:00 AM

Thanks, sweetie. I know you are a kindred spirit in this respect. :) You have the artistic side as well. How fortunate you are! Hugs.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2017 8:30:00 PM

Eileen, this is so beautiful. Love how you did that shape at the end. I do know these people who can't appreciate the likes of the great John Donne. (I married one)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/9/2017 3:14:00 AM

I'm married to one as well. Although, he does love the beauty of his own language. Thanks for the visit, dear. I did enjoy making that tiny heart at the end. I love collecting heart shaped things. Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2017 1:05:00 PM

You will never die of hunger, Eileen! Poetry will keep you alive! Luckily there are many who are able to partake of your lovely and emotional poetry. ~ Sending you hugs and hyacinths:) // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/9/2017 3:16:00 AM

No...that's certainly true! ;) I'm glad you are sending me hyacinths, dear. You always now how to cheer. Hugs

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/7/2017 11:57:00 AM

Lovely write Eileen! hugs xomo!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/9/2017 3:17:00 AM

Thanks, Maureen. :) Glad you liked it, dear.

Chris Green

Date: 4/7/2017 6:22:00 AM

Poetry has this affect on many, it is a daily need, a nourishment for the mind and the soul. So beautiful this outlet for creativity and you have described it well.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/9/2017 3:15:00 AM

Definitely. I've written a poem entitled A Glutton for Your Poetry. I just can't get enough of this good stuff. :) Thanks for the visit, dear.

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/7/2017 5:29:00 AM

Beautiful is your poem, almost like a song// The lyrical pain of ache lingers for so long long long ...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/7/2017 5:32:00 AM

Thank you, Probir. It's good to hear from you. Much appreciated.

Phil Capitano

Date: 4/7/2017 4:02:00 AM

Really beautiful Eileen ~ love the references to other poets but I especially love the second verse.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/7/2017 4:06:00 AM

Phil...I really do not know what I would do without poetry. I love Langsten Hughes and I love Donne...Death Be Not Proud always fills me with awe. A Dream Deferred is also special...I love Poe...I love I love I love....I really feel bad for people who are not moved by poetry. What joy they are missing. Thanks for the lovely visit.