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My Guitar - First Place Contest Winner Premiere Contest Winner

A Brian Strand Premiere No 1224 Poetry Contest, Sponsored by: Brian Strand Written: June 20, 2023 ______________________________________________________________
Zealous reflections wrest my heart humble pitapatting Honed toward my ears A thrum glides alone Into a scene within finger tipped firmed curved notes Seeking each chord of tempting harmony played intimately in heartbeats among the rivulets of a tempo step Everything is felt in music This happens as if holding onto each note of my own life Feeling harmonic vibrations in deep resonating moods of cool evenings on the patio Crackling embers at a campfire Voices recite songs held as would become a tradition of simpler times of childhood friendships grew together Held as if we could hold onto moments of hopes, of loves, of dreams. The stars seemed to fall only as we looked away Gained as one humble guitar absorbs a night sky of improvised melodies Each harmony found by instinct by touch, by invisible sight **********************

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Date: 6/23/2023 8:58:00 AM
What an amazing shape and poem, Sotto, congratulations:)
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Date: 6/22/2023 8:06:00 PM
Wonderful ! Great poem and shape ! Hearty Congratulations on your trophy win, dear Lasaad!
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Date: 6/22/2023 6:40:00 PM
Seeing this piece I see you could put notes to my poem. I don't play but if I did it would be one of the ones I'd copy.
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Date: 6/22/2023 11:16:00 AM
- Super cool poem and shape, Las :) - Congratulations on another top winning poem :) - hugs
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Date: 6/22/2023 8:23:00 AM
Well I already congratulated you ! So elated that this was a trophy win. An amazing entry to the contest and a deserving win. Should go up on the all time greats of Poetry Soup.
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Date: 6/21/2023 8:07:00 PM
Should I congratulate you for your win in the contest now dear friend? A little premature,but assuredly on the mark. The content musical extasy, the presentation, so eye catching as I scrolled deciding what to read first, I abruptly stopped in awe of this piece. Artful, imaginative and exceptional. Oh by the way, did I remember to say I like it? A favorite.
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Date: 6/21/2023 5:17:00 AM
Very creative work of art, my friend. No doubt a top winner.
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Date: 6/20/2023 11:18:00 PM
What a wonderful shape and the poem is fabulous.
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Date: 6/20/2023 4:11:00 PM
My grandparents got my sister a guitar and paid for her lessons from the 5th grade up. I was jealous as could be of her. We would have Friday evening worship family jam sessions where she played the guitar and we all sang. She still plays her guitar and I am still jealous.
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Date: 6/20/2023 3:27:00 PM
Sotto that is fabulous. Sometimes a song or a poem will reach out and touch us. As this one did. Love the imagery. Keep Rolling.
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Date: 6/20/2023 3:22:00 PM
Hello Sotto, I love music. I like the violin ,harp, flute, guitar, piano trumpet. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
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