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My Greatest Adventure

MY GREATEST ADVENTURE The greatest adventure of my lifetime took place in a quaint little town on the East Coast --- a town whose name I can't remember. Oh, but the girl, I will never forget. I met her in a tavern where they serve peanuts at the bar, cold beer in frosted mugs, and a juke box with songs from the sixties. The only vacant stool happened to be next to her. Without asking, I sat down next to her and ordered a mixture of half orange juice and half 7-Up and informed the bartender that when I wanted a refill, I would ask for an OJ-7. (No slam to your integrity but drinks with 7 in the name includes Seagram's 7, which is alcoholic, and I don't drink) He nodded and fixed what I asked for. I was not really in the mood for small talk, but the young lady said to me, with a quizzical look on her face, "The drink you just ordered sounds interesting. Is there a particular reason for it?" I told her that I am a recovering alcoholic and cannot tolerate anything with alcohol in it. She replied, "I too am a recovering alcoholic. I am drinking milk with a small amount of vanilla flavoring and a spoonful of sugar." Oh, yeah, a spoonful of sugar makes the medicine go down. She laughed and said, "Mary Poppins --- right?" Yes, I said to her. Then came the BIG question. "Are you married?" I said, no, I am actually single at the time and have no plans otherwise. To which she replied, "Do you have anything against marriage?" No, but I am doing fine on my own. "Well, okay then." I asked her if she were married and she said, "Not any more. He passed away four years ago and I just never sought a relationship with anyone since that time." My question (in my mind) was, where is this going? So, I asked her, since after all this time, are you ready for a relationship? "Funny you should ask?" she said. What makes it funny, I asked. She told me, I have not been out alone since that time and you are the first man who didn't come on to me as is the normal reaction when a woman is seen alone at the local pub. My response was, You are an attractive lady and I have great respect for a lady who doesn't flaunt herself as if seeking to be drawn into conversation. Well, as the evening wore on, we moved to a vacant table for two and continued to talk about lots of things. In case you are one of those people who is leery about love at first sight, ask my five children and my 12 grandchildren and my 3 great grandchildren just how happy Grandpa and Grandma are. Yes, that was more than 69 years ago and on the 3rd day of next month, that young lady and I will celebrate our 70th anniversary. Life can be wonderful and my life has been just that way since I sat down on that bar stool in the quaint little town whose name I can't remember, and ordered an OJ-7 and got into a conversation with a lady drinking milk, laced with vanilla flavoring and a spoonful of sugar. 3 October 2018 For the contest sponsored by Dear Heart Fictional Writing Challenge 2018

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Date: 10/26/2018 10:47:00 AM
Curtis, what a great story you have given me that rings with a little truth? Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 10/26/2018 7:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance. I am a big fan of yours and consider it an honor for my poem to have been chosen for a place in your contest.
Date: 10/7/2018 12:38:00 PM
Curtis, I am drying the tears on my face. Wonderful, wonderful story. So glad that it is true! Good for you and your wife! Best wishes, Gershon
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 10/7/2018 1:00:00 PM
My, my, my, Gershon. I didn't anticipate such a great response from anyone like the one you gave me. I'm humbled to know that it created that emotion in you. Now, if it only does the same for the sponsor. lol
Date: 10/6/2018 6:08:00 PM
Lovely story, Curtis! warms my heart to hear such...
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 10/7/2018 12:58:00 PM
Thank you, James. I appreciate your comment and your support.
Date: 10/6/2018 3:48:00 PM
I have been truly entertained by your captivating narrative, Curtis! Whether it's fiction or not, I don't care...it still surpasses any OJ-7:) Regards // paul
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 10/6/2018 5:20:00 PM
Thank you, Paul, for those kind remarks. Part of it is true --- the part about the OJ-7. The rest is just putting down words as they came to mind. Another great poet suggested that I break it up into paragraphs and maybe even remove some remarks to shorten it. I'd like your opinion on that as well if you have an opportunity to critique it. Blessings! --- Curtis
Date: 10/5/2018 3:24:00 AM
I thought this is too sweet to be true, too romantic to be true, too lovely to be true. Congratulations you sweet, lovely, romantic lovebirds! Wow! A fav for me. Congratulations! GREAT write!
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 10/5/2018 3:38:00 AM
Thanks, Caren! I so appreciate your comments and invaluable support. It is friends like you who make guys like me want to keep writing poems.
Date: 10/4/2018 10:50:00 PM
Curtis, I rarely read long poems but this one was a joy to read. Congratulations on the big 70. very few couples these days go past 70 months:)
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 10/5/2018 1:51:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel. I, like you, seldom read long poems, but went outside the box and wrote one because a narrative was the only form that pushed my button for this contest. I appreciate your poems, your comments, your inspiration, but most of all, your friendship.
Date: 10/3/2018 4:33:00 PM
So well written narrative Curtis, I enjoyed it. Tom
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 10/3/2018 7:46:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. Glad you enjoyed this purely fictional off the top of my head as I sat and typed it. I don't know where the thoughts occur but after reading it, I even liked it. lol
Date: 10/3/2018 1:12:00 PM
Hey! Curtis, my jigging friend from Dublin lol...quite the narrative...loved every line...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 10/3/2018 7:44:00 PM
Thanks, ^WW^! This old jigging friend of yours is a little tired from all the yard work I did over the weekend but when I saw the contest for this, I just couldn't resist. Totally fiction off the top of my head as I typed. Glad you enjoyed it.

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