My Grandson, Tommy

TOMMY

Blessed are the souls that sing;
A smile their song, laughter their words, 
Whose hearts, though burdened, still take wing
Like radiant sunbirds.

Though Life could sink them with its weight, 
Or pinion them with care, 
And rein them Earthbound, chained by Fate, 
They much prefer the air.

In their bright, empyrean flight, 
They carry us along, 
And we, like tag tails, hang on tight – 
Enchanted by their song.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Watt Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 10:55 AM
I see this was your most viewed poem, and it is delightful. Blessed are the souls that sing. What a delight it must be to have a grandson who takes you along on a carefree flight with a lighter than air soul. This lifted my spirits today. Stay inspired, Mary ~ John
Watt Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 10:18 PM
My heart aches for your loss, Mary. Please accept my deep condolences.
Dembeck Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 12:35 PM
Once again, you are so kind, John. I dedicated this poem to my grandson, Tommy, because it emulates his spirit. He and I were very close. Tommy died at the age of 17 in an auto accident 8 years ago - (he was not the driver). It broke my heart, and I think about him every day and painted 4 pictures of him which hang in my daughter's (his mother's) house and in mine. I'm so glad my poem lifted your spirits, John. - Mary
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May 8, 2016 at 2:28 AM
Mary Grace Dembeck, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT
A  Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 10:27 PM
Mary, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Dembeck Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 11:04 PM
Thank you, {{{SKAT}}} - Mary <3 + :)
Austin Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 10:47 AM
A fine tribute to youth and high spirit. Congrats, daver
Dembeck Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 11:06 PM
Thank you, {{{Daver}}}! - Mary :)
Mumo Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 9:56 AM
A great piece for your grandson you have penned here...7+!
Dembeck Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 4:01 PM
Thank you, Hannington Mumo! :) --Mary
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 3:58 PM
what a charming poem with lovely imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
Dembeck Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Hugs to you, too! :) Mary xoxo
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:54 PM
- Lovely for your grandson, Tommy ! - (I have 3: two boys + one girl) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dembeck Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 7:06 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! (Aren't grandchildren WONDERFUL?!) :) -Love, Mary :)
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