My Grandpaw's Store

pantoum

Some sixty years past when Paw owned a store.
A penny case held toys and balloons
and there was wrapped candy with gum galore.
Got a penny? Might as well ask for the moon.

A penny case held toys and balloons;
I rarely had pennies clasped in my hands.
Got a penny? might as well ask for the moon;
Paw was too busy stocking boxes and cans.

I rarely had pennies, did have two hands;
pennies were promised if I'd sweep the floor
and keep the shelves stocked with boxes and cans.
Pennies were  paid for a hour's work or more.

Pennies were promised if I'd sweep the floor
to earn for wrapped candy and gum galore.
Pennies were  paid for a hour's work or more.
some sixty years past when Paw owned a store.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Macmillan Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 10:11 PM
Hello, Reason, My apologies for getting to your page so late. We so enjoyed your nostalgic take on this contest. Your pantoum is captivating. Thank you for your entry and congrats on the win. Smiles from Cyndi
Brown Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 5:27 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Rhonda and Cyndi's "Penny Pantoums" contest Reason. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 4:37 PM
Great was that penny case..I too remember when one could get some candy for a penny..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Poet Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 11:55 AM
Very good Pan toum here Reason.Congrats on your win in the contest.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 10:02 AM
CONGRATS REASON FOR A SUPER SIXTH PLACE WIN FOR A SENSATIONAL POEM LUV ..
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September 25, 2012 at 1:25 AM
Congratulations Reason, well done and a well deserved win xx
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