My Gramps and Me and the Birds and the Bees

Walks we took, across the bridge and down the ridge we'd climb He'd catch himself to shorten steps, while I'd be stretching mine With fields to plow, and milking cows, yet he always made the time To make my days a memory, that I visit in my mind Those summer days, may have passed away, yet the love just lingers on How simple all the world seemed then, unfurled beneath the sun Together we would brew mischief, while chewing juicy gum We'd talk about most everything, and walk till light was gone I'd ask him things I'd pondered of...and he would give it careful thought He'd scratch his head, and then he said, "I'll give it my best shot!" He'd explain in words I understood, the answers I had sought "How many stars are in the sky?" ..."Well, Sugar Pie...A lot!!" "Where did I come from?" I asked, quite plain. His red-face quickly stunned! "Hmmmm...of all the questions you have asked,....this is a tricky one!" "You see my sweet, when two hearts meet, and two plus two is fun.... "You are the sum, that came from love....a prize your family won!" Oh, if I could choose a day from then .....from summers long ago... Where the sun was gold, the stream was cold, the bluer skies hung low And the quiet space...his whiskered face, and the love he could bestow We'd walk our pace, and beneath that place, where greener grass would grow....
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 7/13/2014 3:42:00 PM
Wow! Carrie. this is such a wonderful highlighting those great times you had with your Gramps. this is masterfully metered and rhymed. Such a pleasure to read, just loved it, my friend. It will go in my Faves..... Robert.
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Date: 7/27/2013 5:56:00 AM
Carrie this is my most favorite entry. It sounds like you were very close to your father. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/25/2013 10:00:00 PM
hello, Carrie the poem is hot and Awesome... congrats with your summer time poem...love Linda
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Date: 7/25/2013 1:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning Carrie love xx
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Date: 7/24/2013 7:35:00 PM
beautiful write .....I enjoyed the read....congrats on your win
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:38:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS CARRIE, a lovely gift of a poem. Thank you for the support my contest. Stop by and enjoy my blog: (A Lavender Day-- summer contest) winners. Have yourself an awesome day. LUV ~SKAT
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Date: 8/16/2010 2:54:00 PM
Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already Carrie. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2010 6:35:00 AM
Many congratulations Carrie on your win in Carol's fine contest with this lovely write on your Gramps >> James
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Date: 8/5/2010 6:02:00 PM
This is so lovely. Reminds me of my dad who was old enough at my birth to be my grandpa so always had time for me even Though he was hard working farmer. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:17:00 PM
Congrats on this well deserved win, Carrie
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:29:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie. With this magnificent write. Grandpa's ways pleasing to the soul, as Granny was to mine. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:19:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Carol's contest.. a dynamic write and wonderful win for u today and enjoy another momentous victory with luv..
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2010 12:28:00 PM
Carrie, I really did enjoy this one..I did not have the honor of having a grandparent that could give me that time and unconditional love...I can tell from the write that he was special and that you have loving memories of him...Keep the creative pen flowing. ..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.."Night Of Desire"...Sara
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Date: 3/14/2010 1:57:00 AM
Beautiful. My granddad loved, just like that. And I loved him. This poem captures that kind of wonderful love. Very nice. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/13/2010 6:41:00 PM
wow, really nice, Carrie, I hope you do well in this contest. And I wanted to thank you for commenting on my blog. Do you think Alex might be brought back? Or did they discontinue that little ritual from last year? yeah,. i think his chance is gone now!
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Date: 3/12/2010 12:46:00 PM
A delightful write, Carrie. A beautiful tribute filled with great imagery. It's poems like this that make me believe that memories are precious!! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/11/2010 11:53:00 PM
Bes wishes with this lovely piece of nostalgia Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 3/11/2010 7:07:00 PM
Oh, this is such a sweet tribute from a "little girl" who really loved her grandpa. Super work, Carrie! Love, Carolyn
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